Jenni Geurink Reading Thoughts: Evaluation: Whenever I have heard about British fighting styles, it has been that they fought with the upmost politeness, fighting in strict formations. The story in this book contradicts that. They may have started fighting in regiments with even rows and precise firings, but by the time they got to Breed's Hill, they gave up on that ideal. It surprised me, especially when General Gage decided he would just "...destroy the entire town..." (p. 323). To think they would give up on there strategies for these so-called "uncivilized children" seems a bit strange to me. Importance: I think it was a very important finding to tell about the British fighting styles because it shows where the government failed too. The soldiers fought the rebels with "animal viciousness" relaying some failed leadership (p. 282). I think the author didn't just want to show the differences between the colonists and the British, he wanted to show the corrupt government, the injustice. It wasn't just the king that presented the problem, it was parliament, it was the generals. There were many other people to blame. Every piece of leadership passed through many eyes and yet it stayed. The English brought this war upon itself by provided too many grievances, too many reasons for colonists to fight.
Reading like a Historian: Change and Continuity: The main item that changed in the second section of this story is the people are fired up. They were brought together in the vital Continental Congresses. They spouted their opinions and came up with strategies. This meeting changed everything. They came together as a common people fighting the same enemy. They didn't want to fight, but they did what they had to keep their beliefs. Obviously the British did not benefit from this change, but some colonists didn't either. The Tories and even innocent civilians faced challenges because of this decision. But overall, the colonists benefited by working together in a they never had before. Using the Past: We can really learn from some aspects of this war. I think we can come to an understanding that we work better when we come together as a nation. We don't need to be split up. This reminds of Congress today and how split divided we are. If we just came to a common consensus the general population would benefit. Nothing will work if we are divided as a people. We can also learn to stand up for what we believe in. Sam Adams, Ben Franklin, and even John Adams didn't take no for an answer. They fought for their constituents like any person of power should. This belief is what helped found America and it is something we should always hold dear.
Alexis Abrego Reading Thoughts: Importance: A key idea about this section is the uniting of the colonies to overcome and solve their problems as a whole. They all had different perspectives and approaches to solving them, but this key group made some of the most important decisons for this country. This also was a major red flag to the British, because a united group was much more dangerous and serious than a bunch of unorganized rebels.
Generalizations: Time and time again the Continental Congress attmpted to reach Parliment and the King to beseach them to change their policies and be treated as equals to solve their problems. However, the English were as blind as ever with their lack of respect for the colists and their "laughable" continental congress. This lack of respect and ability to take a group of people seriously caused the English to lose one of their most valueable colonies.
Thinking Like A Historian: Change and Continuity: People has always been nown to underestimate or misjudge other people. The British made a fatal mistake in taking the rebel militia seriously. By leaving such key points as Breed's/Bunker Hill unfortified or at least on watch the blood that was shed there may have been avoided.
Through Their Eyes: For people like Joseph Warren the cost of freedom didn't matter. He gave his life for a cause he believed in. he didn't care if he would be killed, even when he saw the masses of British coming before him. From where he stood all he saw was a chance to be a soldier fighting for his country.
Comment:The British were known for their militairy strategy and the way they lost control in this part is very important like Jenni stated though I feel that they weren't just doing things out of spite there was militairy strategy in destroying Charlestown and some of the other escapades the generals as a whole decided. Though the plan of attack of Breed's Hill was wasteful.
Question: The first reading thought I had was a question. On page 288 as Revere is going to the boat he sees a woman walking down the street by herself. This woman is Mrs. Gage. He than finds out that she is visiting Warren. He welcomes her in and no more information is given. My question is what was she doing with him. He is one of the known leaders of the Sons Of Liberty. I think that she is giving information about the British to Warren.
Visualization: Another reading thought that I used was visualization. The first part that had a really good image was on page 364. A man had stood up and yelled, "Bring 'em on! Bring them lobster-back!"(364). The out come was horrific. The man had lost his and had a big pool of blood on the "fresh earth". Another part that was easily to visualize was Warren's rampage. He had no ammunition and the only weapon he had was the butt of a rifle. He fought to the end, dying like a solider.
Change and Continuity: At the end of the The Battle of Breed's Hill, we find out that Warren did not survive the battle. Also we find out that Pitcairn did not survive as well. With both sides at a lost, I think the British have lost more. The American army has killed one of their only four commanders.
Through their eyes: This whole thing started with England abusing their power as a leader. The people of America did not like this and this caused them to rebel. This view point caused them to fight for freedom. One of which being Warren. Through out the battle this was Warren's Perspective. He did not feel like a leader, but by fighting with his soldiers he gave them a moral boost. He did not run from the battle, he was willing to die for his country.
Comment:I agree with Alexis, by underestimating the colonist it was setting the British to fail, but than again they have been doing this for a while.
Connection When the rebels won and drove away Pitcairn's men on page 309-310, it reminded me of this Dodge car commercial I saw once. Pretty funny.
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Predict When John asks if Sam has "someone in mind to comman this army?" (335), it was pretty obvious that it was going to be George Washington because he had experience and they were going up against s professional army.
Turning Points: In chapter 26, Benjamin Franklin finds out about the death of his wife, Deborah. This makes him realize that there is only one home for him now so he returns to The Colonies.
Through their Eyes Samuel Adams is very loyal. He did not change his views when Colonel Fenton said that General Gage would put Sam in a better position. He just told Fenton to tell Gage "to no longer insult the feelings of an exasperated people" (270).
Comment: I agree with Tou's question. Since Mrs. Gage is an American herself, she probably felt obligated to give Warren details.
Comment: I agree with pamela with her prediction about George washington, it seemed like it was a question that was just asked so his cousin sam and everyone else could agree on him becoming it later on.
Reading Thoughts: Importance- The main importance for this section seems to be the uniting of the colonies. With all of them together there could be a better strong power. "It has to be an army of all the colonies. We need new Jersey and Delaware to send their own men..." (335).
Visualize- When the men were on their journey to Philadelphia and got out of the country area you can see all of the people slowly gathering around them. "Adams responded to the waves of the people they passed, heard the word shouted out by many,Massachusetts. They know how we are. They are aware" (224). You can see the town they're going through with the town with how Adams describes it, "He could see a tall steeple, a grand church, more people stopping to point, wave at them" (224).
Reading like a Historian: Using the past-Franklin ends up hurting physically, "My legs hurt, my knees are giving me some difficulty on the stairs...but I'm not in such bad condition" (224). Then later on he ends up hurting when his wife dies in chapter 26. This brings him back to the colonies and because of his past with how much passion he puts into his work he'll put all his concentration into his work now.
Cause and Effect- Because of the shooting in Boston, on there way to Philadelphia they had ran into areas that had "better news here, of course, better information" (224). They would have to be careful how they talk about shooting. Also when they were on there way they also wonder how they would be treated to there arrival. Because of them arriving before the men from Virgnia Sam explained his strategy "keep quiet on the issues, don't burst out with all our demands" (228). Adams listened but told Sam "I understand that...But we must hear every view, we must know how each colony perceives their role in this..." (228).
Questions At the very end of this section, it is talked about how even Abigail Adams didn’t know about the battle that was happening right in front of her eyes. “She did not yet know the incredible cost, did not yet know that the British had left a thousand men on that ground, did not yet know…” (339) When the close people to the leaders of the rebellion don’t know what is going on, then what did a regular colonist know, how much of it did they know, or when would the colonists find out.
Importance When Joseph Warren picked up a musket and joined in the fight against the British Soldiers, he sent a huge message to all the colonists fighting. He wasn’t only talking the talk, but he turned his words into actions. He was fighting about something he truly believed in, and brought hope to the rebelling colonist. Rafe Johnson talked to Warren about that, “…We volunteered to come here because we believe in what you’ve tried to do, the things you write about. But when a man stands up with a musket in his hand, sometimes it’s hard to remember all that. When I saw you, when you picked up that musket…well, you honor us, sir. I’m privileged to be fighting next to you.” (332) Because people, like Joseph Warren, put their words into actions, it inspired other people to help part from England.
Turning Points In chapter 29, the British were being taken down by the colonists. The rebels hid in the trees and shot at the British, this action caused the British to stop fighting back. British were too tired and some of their men had been shot, they had no choice, they could not fight. Pitcairn said himself, “‘we cannot pursue. We must keep moving.’” (281) The roles were being reversed. Before the British were bullying the colonies. Now the colonists are taking control.
Differing Perspectives The British and the colonists were in battles for very different reasons. The British were trying to get the colonies to get back in line and get rid of the radicals that were rebelling. The colonies were fighting for a say in their government, but also for freedom from England. Because I’m an American, I agree more with the colonists that were rebelling. We need to have a voice in our government and if we can’t be heard, then we need to start our own government.
Comment Elizabeth, i agree with your thoughts about how this section is about how the colonies are coming together. In the beginning, they didn't have a set army. But there were people throught out the colonies forming their own groups that were fight against the british. At this point they may have not been fight together exactly. But they were fighting for the same cause.
Importance: The men from Massachusetts had a hard time getting the other Colonists to understand the importance of England's threat. They didn't understand how it felt, what was really happening in Boston. For instance on page 224, Adams recalls his conversation with some New Yorkers saying, "How dreadful your situation in Boston must be, please pass the wine." These people had no idea how terrible the conditions actually were. Then came the rumor that the British took over Boston and it brought the people together. They understood what was important.
Connections: When Adams was thinking about their visit to New York and thought about how they didn't understand, it made me think of the movie Hotel Rwanda. There was a moment where an American cameraman was talking to the hotel manager about the hotel's condition and the dangers it faced. He felt sorry for the people, but he knew there was nothing that could be done. The hotel manager had asked what the outside people thought of this, and his reply was that people watch what's happening and say it's sad. Then they continue eating their dinner. This was exactly the same thing happening in the book. People knew what was going on, but didn't do anything to stop it. All they could give were words of pity and continue life.
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Differing Perspectives: I imagined myself in Gage's perspective. He was a man who like many others, wanted fame and glory. He had differing ideas from his wife on how to raise their children which caused bumps in his relationship. On top of that, because of his conversation with the King, he was given the responsibility of crushing the rebels. All of England's dignity was placed on his shoulders. I understand how he was caught up in the moment, how he feared that he might anger the King with his opinions. There was a lot a stress for this man. He desperately needed to defeat the rebels to protect his pride and his country's. Because he failed, he began waiting for a replacement. I can't say I agree with Gage, but I do understand what he's going through. There's nowhere left for him to go so he's looking for a way out.
Change/Continuity: Gage was given reinforcements to help him correct his mistakes, but this change didn't do much. He was given three of the top generals in England, but because of all their differences they seem to get nowhere. This lack of cooperation caused problems for the army. And with Gage being an incompetent leader, choosing a battle plan only added to the stress. This proves that sending in reinforcements wasn't a positive change.
Comment: I agree with Rachel in her "Importance" paragraph. Joseph Warren did turn his words into actions and not just watch the fighting. He showed that he didn't just talk about freedom, but fought for it as well. His actions were inspiring to the men around him.
America was just a bunch of colonies to Britain. The British pictured Americans as needy, untamed farmers. They thought the colonists were unorganized. But when the Colonies agreed to come together, the British were in for a surprise. In the first battle of the section, the British were overconfident and did not consider the colonists a threat. However, the Americans had unique tactics, like stealth and camouflage, and they ended up making the British retreat.
Visualize
The image I could easily depict in my mind was the British coming up Breed’s Hill to attack the Americans. I pictured the colonists crouched, hiding behind the wall, all of them really nervous because they were facing the best army in the world, and they were outnumbered by about 500. I pictured the British lines marching up the hill, and it was easy to picture them like one entity, thinking and fighting as one, and they kept coming. If you’re a Star Trek fan, it reminded me of the Borg drones, who all share one mind and think and act as one. The colonists had indivuality and creativity on their side, and that’s part of what made them win the war.
Change and Continuity
In the first battle of section 2, the British didn’t bring so many troops to fight because they believed the colonists were an unorganized and powerless bunch of people who they could easily take on. They were proven wrong, however, and had to retreat. In the second battle, on Breed’s Hill, they brought many more reinforcements, 2,000 soldiers, so that they outnumbered the colonists. Warren describes his view of the British reinforcements: “He could see more detail now. It was not the boats that were red. It was their cargo. They were filled with masses of British troops” (Rise to Rebellion 360).
Turning Points
I think the biggest turning point of this section was when the British Army, renowned for being the best army in the entire world, was forced to retreat at the hands of their own colonists, a rag-tag group of farmers. I think this really showed the British and King George that the British Army wasn’t as good as everyone thought it was. After this first embarrassment, the British realized they were fighting a real enemy, and had to treat the American Colonies as a threat, and that really made the British rethink their tactics, causing a big change in play in the war.
Comment:
Melanie, I thought your perspective on Gage was really interesting. I can see how Gage could be relatable and that he was having lots of problems, especially since he was given such an enormous job by King George, but I still don’t like him or sympathize with him. He is a bad father and husband, and poor Margaret probably thinks he’s not good for their family, too.
Using The Past: What I think is most intrasting about this book is that in reading it, we can find out more about our past and be sure that we don'nt make the same mistakes our Fore Fathers did. But another important thing is to learn what they did that worked- and this whole book about the Revolution shows the importance that you need to stand strong if you think something wrong is happening in your government or een in just your community.
COnnections: Not this mighgt be a little out there because my mind wanders a ton, but while I was reading anything that had to do with Abigail Adams in this part I couldnt help but be reminded about my history ay project last year, which talked a lot about women's rights. Now, stay with me here, I know that she didn't have very many rights in the forming of the country, but she is a prime example of a strong woman, both in real life and this fictional story. She was inspiring to the women of today, and portrayed perfecting in this book.
Vocabulary: I'm pretty much and English freak, but I surprisingly had to look up a word. The word "pithy" came up on page 243, and I can honestly say I've never seen this word before. It means "consisting of pith," and pith means "detailed" or "importance."
Perspective: I have to say the perspective I like reading the most is Ben Franklin. Just something about his actions and words make me feel like he is the one who is most "for the people and by the people."
Comment: I agree with Emily, I don't like Gage at all. In the beginning I thought he was relateable and I felt for him, but then as we go on I see that, as Emily said, he's a bad father and husband, and he's selfish.
Reading Thoughts: Big Ideas- I think that the big idea of this section was all 13 seperate colonies coming together as one body, willing to fight for the same cause. "If there is a fight, then we will fight together" (234). "They had reacted to the rumors os one body, one people" 235)" After the congress, all the people from the 13 colonies come together to form one body, one perople. they came together to fight the British for their independence. Most of the section talked about the speeches and meetings like the Continental Congress that took place to try to pursuade the colonists that it was necessary to split from England and become their own country. Importance- One of the most onportant parts in this section was when the British were marching towards the American army and Joseph Warren looked around and grabbed the musket of a fallen soldier. That simple action symbolized that all the talk and planning were actually happening. It also meant that the the lawyers and the doctors and the generals were fighting together with the farmers and everyone else. They were all equal, trying to fight for the same cause. "When I saw you, when you picked up that musket...well, you honor us sir. I'm privileged to be fighting beside you" (369). Reading Like a Historian: Cause and Effect- Because of the Continental Congress, an idea of independence appeared in the minds of many people. Because of that idea and the mass of people, it helped casue the start on the Revolutionary War. The main people who helped this idea form were Samual Adams, John Adams, and the Son's of Liberty. "We must declare ourselves to be a free and independant country. We must establish ourselves with a government, we must invite alliences with foreign countries, build our own defensive structures..." (332). Differing Perspectives- As the perspectives changed between General Gage and the Colonists, the way the people from Massachusettes were viewed changed. Sam Adams said that people were surprised to find out that the people from Boston were "Civilized". On the other hand Lord Howe said that he viewed the Congress as criminals. Comment: Taylor, I agree with your comment about Ben Franklin being the most interesting perspective in the story. He really gives insight on to how the English are viewing all the events that are occuring in the colonies.
Ashley Hanke Reading thoughts Big Ideas: I thought a big Idea during this section of the book was how the colonies come together as one; to support a single cause. The 13 colonies go against the British to fight back there independence, and grow stronger as a country to split away from the British.
Vocabulary: While i was reading the section, I didnt know what the adjective " Cacophony" meant. Cacophony means a jarring, discordant sound. It is the use of harsh or discordant sounds in literary composition.
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Change/Continuity: The first battle against the colonists, Gage didnt think the colonists would be prepared for to go against them; but they were wrong, and had to retreat because the colonists had more power then the thought. When the second battle occurred on Breeds Hill, they outnumbered the colonists, and defeated them.
Through their eyes: The whole conflict began in England when the abused their power as a country, and thats what caused America to rebel. During this section it was Warrens perspective, and him fighting for his country.
Vocabulary: During the second section of the book I came across a word that I was unsure of. On page 243 I didn't know what oblige meant. I now know that oblige means in this case of the text to do what someone wants in order for that person to be content.
Question: While I was reading I had a question on page 271. I know that Gage has been given a specific task but thinking that he can just purchase Sam Adams patriotism is absurd in my perspective. I have been taught since I was little that feelings, love, or anything cannot be purchased. It simply just doesn't work that way. I was just wondering and thinking how Gage thought that Sam's patriotism was going to be purchased? I am very proud of the way that Sam Adams responded but the fact that Gage could even ask him that really shocks me.
Change and Continuity: Right after the "Boston Massacre" happened I am sure many citizens were scared to go outside; they wanted safety. It is very amusing that people can change so quickly. What I mean is it stated on page 302 that an audience came out to watch The Battle At Concord. It could be out of bravery or maybe it is just foolishness. Furthermore, as more and more events take place the people seem to change from not wanting to do with anything of it to being more involved.
Turning Point: There is a turning point for an individual, Gage. When the ministry sent three generals to be his subordinates the life for Gage really changed. Like the book stated, "He had not been replaced." (341) Although now he will have to try and be better than these men who have accomplished very outstanding things. William, Henry, and John are just coming to help Gage out but I feel like it is going to be hard for him to share the power. What Gage is used to is no longer the normal way.
Comment: After reading over Ashley Hanke's post I found myself to agree with what she stated for the big idea. The people are finally fighting for what they believe in not what the British tell them to believe in. This hopefully is a start to break away from the British like you said and finally end this issue.
Preview/Predict: After previewing section two, I came across a map in chapter 29. After examining the map and reading the annotations near it I made a few predictions about the upcoming element in this novel. I predict that Pitcairn's troops will march into Lexington and battle Parkers troops on the Lexington Green. And while this is happening Sam adams escapes north.
Visualize: I can visualize the encounter with Pitcairn's troops and the rebel civilians in Lexington. Pitcairn ordered the civilians to put down their weapons and disperse immediately, and they did so. But then another officer yelled fire! and a nonviolent occurrence turned into a massacre. The rebels were running in a panic, as the guns were shot. "… women screaming, some running into the green, falling into the arms of their husbands, more voices, cries and curses from the men who were still trying to get away, to escape the blood spreading on the green" (. This imagery paints a very clear image in my mind of the chaos and goriness of this day in Lexington.
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Change and Continuity: At the beginning of this novel the British were viewed as a powerful empire however after the Battle of Breeds Hill, along with other battles the British empire is slowly diminishing. In fact, the British have lost more troops that the American rebels have.
Through Their Eyes: During the Battle of Breeds Hill Warren provides leadership to his troops. Himself along with his loyal militia want to fight. They all strive for freedom, and their own rights apart from the British Parliament. They are willing to risk their lives, so that their families and friends can live a free life, a fair life free of corruption, violence, and unfair laws and taxes.
Comment: After reviewing Kallie's thoughts and ideas I realized that her comment about change and continuity seems to be true in my opinion. The colonists were unwilling and did not want to get involved in anything against Parliament in the beginning. However, as time progressed more and more became involved. So i agree with Kallie that they became more involved.
Question: One question that I have thought about goes back to my previous comment about there lack of communication. On page 267 Dr. Franklin receives a letter from his son saying he attended his mothers funeral. What shocked me is that the letter was written on Christmas eve; however, Franklin did not receive the letter until February according to the date at the beginning of the chapter. This means it took approximately two months for Franklin to receive the letter of his wife's death. Does it really take that long to transport mail? or was the letter simply held by someone for that long?
Connections: If I where to connect to any part of this section it would have to be when John Adams road off to the assembly accompanied by his wife. Mrs. Adams noticed that John was very worried about what he was going to say to the assembly and so she offered him a piece of advice, "My dear husband, I am surprised that you of all people, you who are so versed in all things to do with law, you who are capable of mastering your world, you think you do not have the genius to solve all our problems! Well, perhaps it might be a fine idea to take your doubts to Philadelphia. Perhaps you will meet others like yourself who also have doubts, who gear that their minds are inadequate to the task. Perhaps all of you who are so inadequate should join your minds, combine all the little bits of genius into one that is capable of some accomplishment. Perhaps that is the purpose of this Continental Congress!" (221). I believe that we can all relate to what she is saying, how no one person is good at everything, but together, as a whole, we can accomplish so much more then as individuals.
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Turning Points: One important topic that stands out to me in this section is when Paul Revere road through Lexington on horse back to warn Sam Adams and John Hancock that the British where coming to arrest them. I believe this was very important because if he hadn't made it to Lexington in time Gage's soldiers would have captured two of the most important men to the sons of liberty which could have completely changed the outcome of the War.
Through There Eyes: On page 308 we really get a good viewpoint of what war was like back then and how frighting the rebels uniting as one unit must been. "All along the crest, the rebel line was still forming, massing more tightly as they moved forward, precise, and amazing display of drill and command. As they advanced down the hill, he could see the men themselves, and it was not like the green at Lexington, it was not forty men. It was four hundred" (308). When I look at this situation through the eyes of a commander who is accustomed to having his enemies back down at the sight of his army, it must have been truly terrifying. Not only was it bad enough that he was now faced with a rebel army almost as big as his own, but he was also loosing control of his soldiers which is a fatal mistake at the very least.
Comment: I agree with Holly's visual statement. I also believe that the author did a great job providing fine details of the battle at Lexington just as Holly pointed out.
Importance: One of the most important events was when the colonial militias started surrounding Boston. One reason is that it kept the british at bay, stuck in Boston, and gave the other colonies time to create their own militas. And it gave the contiental congress breating room to appoint George Washington and official create a contiental army from the ragtag militias.
Preview and Predict: The colonist have been putting up a great fight in the first battles. Those at Lexington and Concord, and those at Bunker and Breed's hill. But the major problems are they lack of disipline and supplies. For example Con. Prescott led the troops at Bunkers Hill and Joseph Warren fought well. But one of the reasons they were over run is they lacked the supplies such as black powder and lead shots, and that is one of the main problems that will continue to face.
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Differing Prospectives: There are many differing prospectives in the Congress. The more conservative members of the assemble, many from states like New York, wanted to create a 'Grand Council" to represent the colonies but still be connected to England.(pg. 242) While the more radical members, like the Massachsuettes delegates, voted to stop paying taxes to England altogether.(pg. 253)Finally on the other hand Georgia didn't send delegates at all.
Turning Point: A major turning point was when John Adams got the letter from his wife describing the raids on local farms that the british were conducting near Boston. This was a turning point because it made John Adams more radical like his cousin and it inspired him to spearhead the proposal to nominate Washington to lead the militas and to finally create and army for the colonies.
Comment: I agree with Matthew Selting's Through Their Eyes comment. The british were certainly unnerved by the fight the colonist put up. And they were defeated both physically and mentally at the battle of Lexington and Concord.
Rachel Maguire -I’ll trying not to overlap on too many of the previous comments
Reading Thoughts Prediction – The end of part one was marked by the colonies coming together as one, so as part two began, I expected many changes. I thought that meetings between colonies would go smoother and people would begin talk of a united nation, rather than separate colonies. I thought that talk would arise of how to construct one government for all the colonies, rather than one government for each colony individually. Also, I thought there would be more unity with troop forces or more support from more colonies, rather than the ones closest to battle. Overall, I think I was overly hopeful that the colonies would come together quicker than they did.
Generalization and Connection– One generalization that cannot be overlooked is the power of men of high rank, like Warren, to fight right next to the soldiers he commands. Johnson highlights that truth as he stands beside Warren as they wait for another British attack. Johnson tells Warren that he honors them to be fighting beside them. That part reminded me of a brief conversation in “The Patriot” between two soldiers, one a colonist and the other a slave. The slave only had to fight 12 months for him to be a free man, so before the battle, the colonist reminds him that he’s served over a year, and the slave replies, “I know, I’m here now on my own accord.” Then the colonist says, “I’m honored to be fighting beside you… honored.” The scene between Johnson and Warren reminded me of how much that means. The honor between soldiers and their commanders is a powerful bond that keeps them together when they go into battle.
Reading Like a Historian Differing Perspectives – One of the differences I noticed between the British command and the Continental command is how much the generals care about rank. When Washington was appointed the general of the continental army, he accepted reluctantly. Also, when Warren was at Breed’s Hill, Prescott recognized Warren as his superior and granted him command, but Warren immediately realized his knowledge was inferior and told Prescott to resume command. Later, after seeing Prescott’s leadership ability, Warren vows to make Prescott a general. The British, on the other hand, appoint generals based more on social standing than true ability. It’s a subtle -although not entirely homogenous- difference between the British and the Americans, but it is an important difference nonetheless, especially when you consider that, by the end of the war, the British would have four different commanders to the Colonies’ one.
Using the Past – One event during this section that I don’t think was mentioned by anyone yet was Lord Chatham’s meeting with Franklin. Lord Chatham asked Franklin to assist him in writing a speech to influence the king away from a war against the colonies. Franklin writes an eloquent speech urging the British to acknowledge their mistakes and listen to the colonies. At first, Lord Dartmouth agrees with the speech and states that he thinks it should be considered, but then Lord Sandwich speaks in absolute opposition to the speech, claiming that it asks them to violate the principles of their great empire. He rants about the influence of Franklin and ends his speech by rejecting it completely. In response, Dartmouth apologizes for his oversight. This scene could serve as a lesson to ask for help when you need it and listen to other people’s reasoning, because the loudest mouths aren’t always right.
Comments Calvin, I agree that the combined effort of all the militias around Boston made a huge difference in controlling the British. Even though our militia didn’t really pose a huge threat to the giant British army, it gave us valuable time. Yes, supplies were an issue then and they never stopped being an issue until the alliance with France toward the end of the war. I agree, different perspectives in Congress caused endless problems. When dangers come near your home, you do whatever you can to stop them.
Reading Thoughts Visualize: A great visual image that I had in my mind was when Adams leaves Boston, and all of the townspeople gather around in chapter 22. "As they moved out of Boston, farmers emerged from fields, women stepped out of small cottages, men on horseback moved aside, all saluting in their own way, offoring their hope and guidance and faith that the journey be successful." (221) This shows that the townspeople are pushing for their heros.
Importance: Major Pitcairn wants to make a plan to attack the enemy, but Gage said to wait until Lord Dartmouth issues the orders. It is their job to keep the peace. Gage says, "'I will not start a war, Major. We will make our show of authority, we will march the troops through the towns on drill, but there will be no aggressive act. At least, not by my orders'" (276). Later, Gage gets a letter from Lord Dartmouth allowing them to attack. Gage then says to Major Kemble who gave him the letter, "'Major, I need a meeting of the senior commanders, including the navy. Be sure to send word as well to Major Pitcairn. He has been positively itching for a mission. Well, now he shall have one'" (281).
Reading Like a Historian Using the Past: People in the past weren't much different compared to people in the present. Like people today, people in the past would do anything to spread a little drama and chaos for their own benefit. In chapter 23, a rumor had spread stating that the British had started a "rampage of fire and death". The rumor started when General Gage's troops were spotted marching to Charlestown. The militia were too bold for British command, and they were brought together in a local gunpoweder and gun store, and spread destruction. The members of the militia foolishly bragged about the town's plan, and later Gage was notified. Rumors grew more and more, and people got scared. The word got out so far that the men in Philadelphia heard that Boston "smoldered in runins, blood in the streets... This rumor is a bit extreme compared to the ones today, but the present isn't so different from the past. We may have learned a little bit from the past, but there's still much more to learn.
Change in Community: I think its sort of funny that in the beginning of the book, the townspeople were really afraid after the Boston Massacre. But in chapter 29, people, more specifically men, were gathering to watch the Battle of Concord take place in Lexington. Obviously the community had changed majorly considering the people in Boston didn't even feel the urge to step outside.
Comment: Rachel, I agree with you in your Differencing Perspectives section, when you mentioned the differences between the Brittish and Continental command. The Continental commander the indevidual who does their absolute best, compared to the British who would wind up with more than one commander.
Visualize: "The musket fire had stopped, and now there was a new sound, coming from the bridge, the sound of men cheering, the rebels suddenly erupting in a wild celebration of their victory"(p. 278) I could feel the excitement through my body as the rebels had driven the king's soldiers away. I cannot even imagine how they must have felt. Good, great, and happy do not even come close to the satisfaction in the young men's hearts as they became victorious. I can hear the loud cheering and wild talk to a point where it is almost overwhelming. All their hard work has paid off, yet there is still lots of fighting to do. This scene was unforgettable, for it was very easy to visualize and create a movie in my head. It seemed like I was there and had just driven the king’s soldiers away.
Connections: We have all lost a loved one and when this happens it seems like your life just stops, but the whole world just keeps on going. When Franklin lost his wife Deborah, it definitely shocked him. How could his wife die? Getting the letter two months after her death was probably also hard, for his wife was dead and he didn’t even know it. This was a very emotional time for Franklin and he did not have time to be sorrowful, but had to get ready for a fight. This all happen on page 240. I have lost friends and family to cancer and it is one of the hardest things to get through. There is so much going on in Franklins head that it probably overwhelming and stressful.
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Through Their Eyes: On page 332 there is a passage in which a man named Rafe Johnson spoke to Dr. Warren, “When I saw you, when you picked up that musket...well, you honor us, sir. I'm privileged to be fighting beside you." After reading this it got me thinking; is Warren any different than Rafe is? Sure Warren helped with saving lives of the wounded, but Rafe is making a big sacrifice just like anyone else fighting. He had to leave his friends, family, home, and chose to fight. He is a hero without even knowing it. He became a rebel, which take some guts. It's easy to do what one is told to do, but when it comes to doing what you believe in it is so much more difficult. Well, Rafe Johnson...you honor others too. You honor the ones who were not brave enough to go against England and be a rebel.
Turning Points: One of the biggest turning points in the book so far happened in chapter 29. This is when the rebels made the king’s soldiers retreat. Not only was this a time of celebration, but it also built up all the men’s confidence. They may be going up against a large, well trained army, but the rebels have more emotion in their fighting. They are fighting to be free from England. Driving the army away is just the beginning of something great. The men are fighting for the same reasons and it is all or nothing.
Comment: I agree with the visualize section. When Adams left I could see all the people stopping what they are doing to watch him leave. I can also hear "thank you" in the croud along with "you make us proud." Not many people are willing to leave their life to fight and risk their lives. Everyone who left were truely heros. I also agree with your using the past. People back then are just like us today. They liked their drama and rumors were also probibly spread.
Big Ideas: A huge big idea in part two is the fact that each colony individually would be helpless in fighting the larger body of England. However, as they came together as one fighting power they were so much stronger. This actually became a threat to England causing their strength in the revolution. They wanted their independence, we know this from reading primary opinions, and as one powere they were able to fight for it.
Vocabulary: I came across the word, 'warf' and honestly had no idea what that might be. I had to go to a dictionary and figured out that the word meant: "a structure on the shore of a harbor where ships may dock to load and unload cargo or passengers." Back in the days of the Revolution, they had some very interesting and sophisticated language compared to now!
Reading Like a Historian: Using the Past: There are many succesful things from these happenings in the past that we can use today. The revolution would not have been succesful if all of the colonies hadn't come together to fight as one body. Even though there was quarreling that existed between the colonies, they each stood up for what they believed in.. the same thing, independence from the British. Therefore, in doing this, the war on their part was succesful. In current issues we need to remember to stand up for what we believe in, and know that coming together like the colonists makes us stronger.
Turning Points: Gage went into the revolution thinking that they would defeat the colonists with no problem at all. Going into the first battle, they were shocked to see that they were outnumbered and had to retreat the battle because surprisingly, the colonists had an extreme degree of more power than they thought.
Comment: Jenny, I agree with your 'Turning Points' section. Having the King's soldiers retreat was a huge excitement for the colonists. They knew they had the power in them to fight, because they fought for what they wanted, their independence. Numbers didn't matter.
Preview/Predict: Looking at the section before I read, there were many maps of locations that I knew important battles occured at. I predicted that in this section, the Revolutionary war would begin. I predicted/had some prior knowlege that certain characters (ex.Patrick Henry, George Washington, Colonel Prescott) will have great historical importance later on in the government, community or military.
Visualize: This section was great for creating mental pictures. It described the batle at Breed's hill in complete detail, such as how the soldiers dug out the hill to create a "fort". It also described in vivid detail what was happening on the battle field, making it easy for you to imagine exactly how close the British were before the order to fire came. The maps included in the section also helped the reader to understand where the battles took place.
Turning Points: Hutchinson had failed to lead the colonists how the king wanted; he allowed the rebellion to grow and attack the British under his weak rule. This forced him to be replaced by General Gage. Gage's leadership marked the king's true attempt at dominating and crushing the rebellion. This ultimately made the colonists turn to violence and war to fight for their rights that were being taken away under the British rule. When the rebellion started, this eliminated any chance of turning back to the way things had been in the past- They would either defeat the British and gain their rights, or they would fail and the British would make life in the colonies unbearable.
Differing Perspectives: Rise to Rebellion is written in different perspectives chapter by chapter. This is done so that one gets everyone's different voice and opinion on current events. The perspective I often agree with is John Adams. He thinks before he speaks, is a logical and practical thinker and is not as bold and brash as his cousin, Sam. He adds a level-headed voice in the mix of loud and angry radicals.
Comment: Anna, I agree with your Using the Past section. Coming together as one nation was key to the success in later defeating the British Army. Also, without the majority of people working towards the same goal, the congress would not be able to accomplish anything that they were able to.
Cause and effect: Continental Congress had an idea of independence and appeared the in minds of many people. Because of the excitement of the people.. it helped start the Revolutionary War. The Son's of Liberty were the main people in the excitement. They said that they needed to become free and and independent country.
Differing Prospectives: There are many prospectives from the Congress members. Some of the more conservatives wanted to create a Grand Council to represent the colonies. The Massachusetts delegates voted to stop paying taxes to England altogether.And Georgia didn't send any delegates. So as we see there are many different perspectives to see what everyone is thinking/ feeling.
Connections: When Benjamin Franklin lost his wife I could really feel his pain and it could really comment to the readers. I thought that sense he didn't know until 2 months after then event.. i just couldn't imagine the pain that he must have felt thinking that his wife was alive and well when she had died. I think that reached out to a lot of people.
Prediction – Part One ended by the colonies coming together as one, so as part two began, I expected some dramatic changes. I believed that people would start acting as one and try to make the governments one, other than one government for each and every colony.
Comment: Anna, i agree with you in John Adams having the best perspective and saying that he is logical and thinks about what he says before he talks. :)
Connection: The connection I made was between Sam Adams, John Adams, Robert Paine, and Tom Cushing's journey to Philadelphia to represent the colonists at the Continental Congress and political campaigns. I made this connection because as the four were making their way to Philadelphia, every town they stopped in they tried to gain the trust of the colonists and explain more thoroughly what exactly it was they were going to be doings, as well as clearing up the rumors that were being made. This is just like the political campaigns we have now, minus the commercials, fancy buttons, and bumper stickers.
Visualize: When soldiers came to attack Prescott, Warren and their men up on Breed's Hill, I could see the column of red making their way up the slant, the shock and the fear in the faces of the men behind the wall, and the smoke firing from their muskets. I can picture the depressing sight of "...a thick carpet of red and white, hands and arms and fallen muskets in one solid mass all down in front of the line" (pg. 335). But most plainly I can see the face of Warren, full of confusion and sadness as he sees the soldier he has just shot, and looks past the uniform to see the face, the face of another human being just like him.
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Using The Past: The past events from the town meetings, to the mobs, to the Boston Massacre and Tea Party, have all shown the seriousness of the frustrations of the colonists and have brought the men to where they are now - surrounded by their neighbors, family, friends - all ready to stand up for what they believe in through the process of war. WE can learn from the past by realizing that some issues can be solved through compromise rather than violence. In this case, I believe the war was inevitable and overall very effective and the best choice, though not all inconveniences whether big or small should result in violence.
Change and Continuity: From the beginning of the book to this second section, the actions of the colonists towards the soldiers, Englishmen, and King George have became much more violent, though the perspective of each side has not. To the Englishmen and the King, the colonists are just another "thing" to control and take advantage of. To the colonists, the Englishmen and the King are oppressors, who try and control what they do, when they do it, and how they do it as well. Neither side has really benefited from the change thus far, the colonists have if anyone, just because they have proven to England that they are not defenseless and will fight back. The English have not, however, benefited from this because it is yet another issue that they must attend to.
Comment: I agree with Anna regarding the different perspectives chapter by chapter. John Adams seems to know exactly what he's talking about and knows exactly what he needs to say and when he needs to say it. Overall, Adams, being a lawyer, keeps it calm and cool even when swarmed by those not nearly as focused as him.
Visualize: When Adams finally agrees to go to the meeting for the sons of liberty, I can't help but think of the picture in Congress of all of the men of that time debating. Although that is not trying to portray that event, it does stick in my mind because such a mindful man of the law has been outraged enough that he speaks his mind freely amoung many others who oppose the kings actions, the picture of him on the podium sends chills through the body for such a grand display of unity.
Connections: When Washington was appointed the position of Commander in Chief he did not feel like he was aquired to do such a job he considered himself not expierienced to do. My mom recently was promoted to basically running a dental office and being the one who ensures everyone gets "x" amount of hours. She did not feel like she was worthy of the job but as she learned and felt the support of the office she has grown into the position as Washington did with the army.
Turning Point: During the battle of Breed's Hill the Colonial Army had inflicted considerable damage to the British force, although they had to retreat from the battle they left with a great message that if the british were to succeed they would have to have a much larger force due to the casualties done by a "rag-tad group of farmers."
Vocabulary/Concepts As I read this section I came across the word orators many times. I then looked it up in the dictionary and found out that it was "a public speaker, especially someone with great eloquence." This made sense to me, because every time I saw this word it was with the speeches or meetings that Adams and the other delegates were at.
Visualize The easiest part for me to visualize was The Battle of Breeds Hill. I thought the description of this event was wonderful. In my mind I could see all the red uniforms of the British as they were coming towards the rebels. I could hear the voice of Prescott yelling, "Don't fire...till you see the whites of their eyes!" (pg 367) And last, I could see Warren as, "he tried to hold the gun still, but it was shaking, jumping, bouncing about with the drums, the damned drums, and the end of the barrel was moving all over the man's body, his chest, his stomach, no, too low, now the head, the young face...freckles...and he saw the man's eyes..." (pg 368)
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Through Their Eyes When General Warren went to go visit Colonel Prescott he never imagined that he would get in the action. When he did he was scared because he had never done it before. The author writes, "Warren clenched his fists, pulled himself into control... felt his hands shaking, blinked hard, tried to clear his mind" (pg 364-365).
Turning Points One main point was Paul Revere's ride to go warn others about the coming of the British. Because of his job the men knew it was time for the fight. "All along the roads, doors opened, window curtains were pulled back, the farmers and villagers coming awake to the sharp call that a great force of soldiers was marching their way" (pg 290)
Comments: I agree with Mitchell when he said that the meetings of the Sons of Liberty was a good event to visualize. I could also see and hear the men while they were speaking at the podium.
READING THOUGHTS Big Idea: A big idea in section two of this book in my opinion is the fact that Britain underestimated the Colonists. For example, in the battles of Lexington and Concord, the British thought it was silly of the colonists to stand up to the royal army of the king. When time came though, and the Colonists defeated the British troops it was probably quite a surprise. This underestimation of the Colonists and their rag-tag farming militia men happens several times.
Prediction: While reading about John Adams' strong decision about getting a professional commander to command the army, it was pretty obvious he was talking about the famous man from Virginia: George Washington.
READING LIKE A HISTORIAN Differing perspectives: We all that theirs two sides to every story. In this "story" the British are fighting because they want more land, the Colonists are fighting because they want nothing to do with England. It's understandable if you're looking from a British man's perspective, for example King George III. His family has been conquering land for centuries that's why the British Empire was the most stable, so fighting with the Colonists was just another way to make his Empire bigger and him a stronger man. Looking through the Colonists' eyes (sons of liberties), they ran from England for freedom, the reason they fight is for independence. Personally, i agree more with the Colonists because if you move away from something you don't like, (like the British laws and rules) you don't want it to follow you.
Using the Past: In reading this book you can learn that fighting for what you think is right... is right. It shows in present day fantastically. People in colonial times rebelled i.e. protests etc... We protest nowadays and that's how we get to the higher power. So through understanding how the past reached the higher power, we use the same skill.
COMMENT: I agree with Kerri about the visualizing of the battle of Bunker Hill and how the author did a fantastic job at writing it. I also agree with her tid bit on Turning point when Paul Revere warned the men. Thanks to Paul Revere the men were prepared to fight for their freedom and today's freedom.
Big Ideas/Generalization- One big idea in section two is that all the colonies came together to try to beat the British. England thought the colonies had weak leadership and were no threat to them, but they didn't know how much stronger the colonies got by joining together. They were very confident that America would surrender right away. America knew the have an advantage in the war because it is in America so they know the land better.
Importance- The importance of section two is that instead of 13 different colonial armies in America, they are now 1. They brought in all their ideas to find the best way to defeat the British. The colonies knew that the only way they can win the war is to come together, they had no chance if they fought as 13 separate armies.
Reading Like an Historian Turning Points- People viewed the British army as a powerhouse in the world, so England thought they had total control over America. The colonies saw this as a chance to become stronger and upset the British in the first battle. It was a reality check for the arrogant British army.
Change & Continuity- England's overconfidence has remained the same throughout this time thinking that America is nothing. One big thing that changed was that the American colonies came together for the war to defeat England. America benefited the most because by coming together, they brought in many more great ideas and tactics.
Comment- Mitch, I very much agree with you when you say that the colonial army sent a big message to the British. The British have a much harder fight on their hands than they predicted.
Reading Thoughts- Importance: Towards the beginning of chapter 28, it tells us that Revere had noticed another change in routine. “Revere had noticed another change in British routine. More than once a day, some officer, perhaps a small group of them, would happen by his workshop, pay their own compliments. He understood that they were on their own personal mission, finding out what the fuss was about, just who this silversmith was and what manner of threat he might be to the affections of their women. But today they had not come, the streets quiet, belonging only to the citizens, many with quickened steps, their sense of alarm driven by the feeling that something was already happening, some movement, some plan of the army that no on could explain.” Because of everything that is happening, things/people and the routine are changing. People are becoming more aware, and cautious.
Visualization: In the beginning of chapter 28, I could easily picture Paul Revere walking down the alley and seeing all the things he sees. “Revere moved into the narrow alleyway, stopped for a long moment in the dark, listening, scanning the street, doorways and the black windows. He had passed the tavern where so many of the officers could always be found, was as surprised as the man who served the ale that the place was quiet, no discordant songs spilling into the street. His eyes sought out the shape of the doorway, a few steps farther down the alley, and he moved that way, then waited one more cautious moment. Suddenly the door opened, dull candlelight splitting the alley, one man slipping outside. The door closed quickly, and Revere saw the man glancing about, adjusting his eyes in the dark. He recognized the man’s stooped posture, the floppy hat. It was Will Dawes, who saw him now.” (Pg. 255)This was a good scene to visualize, because it went into very good details.
Reading like a historian- Turning Points: A turning point, I think, is when Benjamin Franklin decides to move back to the colonies after he hears his wife has died. A passage in the book says: “My son is right. I have been away too long. There is only one home now. He looked at her, thought, it will be farewell now…. He had certainty, knew the only place he belonged now. He shuffled the papers, searching for the letter he had already composed, booking the passage to Philadelphia.”(Pg. 241) He realizes that the colonies is where he belongs, and that it’s his only home.
Through their eyes: The battle that happened in England was because they had abused their power as a country, which made America rebel. Warren provides leadership to his troops during the Battle of Breeds Hill. (Most of this section was through Warren’s eyes, and how he was fighting for his people.) He and his militia are willing to fight and risk their lives so that their families and friends can be free from all the violence, and arbitrary laws. They all aim for freedom, their own rights, and want to be away from the British Parliament.
Comment: Jon, I deffinitely agree with your turning point. You stated it very well.
Khalia Kulppi importance; the most important part of this section is when the american realize that they need to join together in order to beat the british.
Connection- When the colonists joined together it reminded me of the movie, Gridiron Gang. in this movie, a bunch of gang ridden convicts make a football time inside of a prison. they all hated each other at the beginning of the movie, however throughout the movie they got closer because they realized in order to win the football game they had to join together, this is what the colonists did in order to beat the british.
i agree with jon rohr when he says how the brithsh were overconfident and arrogent when they started this battle. it was for sure a major part of the reason that the colonies had over powered them.
Big Idea/Generalizations: A big idea that I saw in the second part of the book was the British fighting strategy compared to that of the Rebels. A good example is when the Gage, Howe, and Clinton are planning an attack on the Charleston Peninsula. General Clinton's plan is to, "sweep in behind the rebel position. The rebels would have nowhere to go and would probably surrender" (350). To this Howe replies, "you propose to assault the rebels from behind?...I will not debate General Clinton on the proper etiquette of war" (350). Howe proves that the British believed that there was a "proper etiquette" to war, something that the rebels will not follow. Howe and Clinton also prove that the British underestimate the rebels. Howe states, "it is entirely possible we may not have to fire one shot" (351).
Visualize: Something I could easily visualize was after George Washington gives his acceptance speech to be General of the Continental Army. He shakes hands with Benjamin Franklin, and states, "I am afraid I am but an amateur in these affairs" (340). To which Franklin replies, "So are we all, Colonel" (340). This statement made me realize that Washington and Franklin both knew what a huge responsibility they had. They had to make choices that could mean the loss of lives and change the future for both Britain and the Colonies. It also made me realize that Franklin and Washington both wondered if they could handle this huge responsibility.
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Turning Points: A huge turning point in the American Revolution was the battle of Lexington and Concord. There the rebels decided to make a stand against the British army, and fired the first shots of the war. I thought it was very interesting that the author wrote the battles through the perspective of Pitcairn, the British officer in charge. The biggest turning point was when the first shot was actually fired on the British, and the British returned fire. Had this not happened, had the rebels just dispersed and let the British continue on, things might have turned out very different in the revolution.
Differing Perspectives: Different perspectives caused a challenge for the delegates from Massachusetts, and it was made obvious when they traveled through New York. Sam Adams states, "Here is the challenge gentlemen. This is a very different world. No opposition, no armed siege, nothing to inspire their own protests" (223). Because the people of New York are living happily under British rule, they have a different perspective on the idea of breaking ties with England.
Comment: I agree with Khalia about how important it was that the colonies joined together. They realized that the problems of one colony was the problem of all the colonies.
Alexa Denk READING THOUGHTS Questions: On page 220 it says "Are the infirmities of old age so infectious that not only the bodies of the people, their very bones, but everything they touch, everything around them, every institution must collapse into something rotten?"(pg. 220) I question does every negative occurance have to negatively affect everything else? Sometimes said negative occurances positively affect your future decisions and actions. Connections: In section 2 the tension rises even more than it already has due to the escalating amounts of British soldiers occupying the colonies. The more the English try to force the colonists to do what they want the more the colonists realize how unfairly they're being treated and rebel. This happens in many books and movies, even in everyday life. And in all these instances you find that the character being suppressed or controlled tends to revolt and try to do the opposite of what they are being demanded to do.
READING LIKE A HISTORIAN Turning Points: A major turning point, I believe was when Benjamin Franklin beccame a member of the Continental Congress. At first I didn't think that one man would have much influence of so many intelligent men. He added much needed information because of his years spent living and dealin gwiht the people of England. Without him i'm not sure the people would have realized that every negative thing they encountered was due to King George sending his approval overseas.
COMMENTS: I agree with Zach when he says that a major turning point was when the first shot of the war was fired. Like he says if that had not happened history would be drastically different.
Visualize: Something I see very clearly is the British all lined up waiting to have a "fair" fight with the rebels. The rebels know they can't win with that kind of fighting stratigy and switch to the indian way known as gorilla warfare. I picture them sneaking up on the british and just charging them from the back or hiding behind trees encircling the British.
Importance: The idea that all the colonies now acted and fought as one big force was devastating to the British. The British most likely thought they could take out every coloney 1 by 1 and were rudely awaken when they saw all forces combining.
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Cause and Effect: The British started out fighting with their usual "formal" way of fighting and were caught off guard by the rebels different style of fighting. The rebels won many of the first wars due to these. The British eventually adapted to these fighting ways and the war was more even now.
Turing Point: A very large turning point for the rebels was the realization that the king influenced more than what they origonally thought. This fired up the people even more and made them more rebelious and fight harder in war. This gave them the will and strength to fight on till the end without giving in. They wanted that freedom and they were going to have it.
Comment: I agree with Alexa in saying that without Benjamin the leaders of the country wouldn't know entirly what their up against if not for his prior experience in Britian.
Importance: The most important aspect of this section are the battles at Lexington and Concord. The fact that this is the first time that the English army faces the colonial army makes it most memorable. They have finally realized that the Americans have land, the element of surprise, and passion to fight for what they believe in on their side. The meetings of the Continental Congress were also very important, especially the second one. This is when they make the plans to take action against the English, they elect Colonel George Washington from Virginia to lead the army, and they determine that a war is inevitable.
Visualize: The Battle of Bunker Hill was definitely very easy to visualize in this section. Shaara uses such detail that I found myself in Warren's shoes. I could feel my heart racing. I could hear the drums and the screams and the gunshots. It was so easy to place myself back in that time. Undoubtedly the most exciting part of the section for me.
Cause and Effect: In this section there is extensive cause and effect for both the British and the American armies. One cause is the three disagreeing generals coming over from England. This caused the British strategy to take longer in planning. Evidently leaving more time for Washington, the generals, and the soldiers to prepare for battle. During this point of British weakness they are inadvertently giving strength to the Americans. Another one of the cause and effect parts that I recognized as important was when Paul Revere made his ride and warned Sam Adams and John Hancock that the British were coming. Because of his actions Adams and Hancock were not captured by the British.
Turning Points: There were many turning points in this section of the book. In my opinion the biggest one was the Battles of Lexington and Concord. This was the first time the British had permission to fight back against the rebels. This was a big turning point because there was no going back to peacefulness they had once had under the Kings rule. The Americans would have to move forward in their steps to independence whether they wanted to or not. Seeking forgiveness from the King would only put their process back even farther.
Comment: Alexa, I agree with your turning points section about how much things changed when Benjamin Franklin beccame a member of the Continental Congress. He definitely helped the men out in ways I'm sure no one else could have.
Visualize: The second section of this book was written in great detail. While I was reading it I got vivid pictures of the Battle at Breeds hill. I could see what the soldiers went through in the battle and it helped me to understand the fight better.
Vocabulary/Concepts: While reading this section when they initially talked about the Battle at Breeds Hill I decided to look it up because I hadn't heard much about it in previous classes. After looking it up, I got more insight on the topic and it helped me better understand the battle and what all went on during it. The online resource gave me a better understanding of the section.
Turning Point: To me the biggest turning point of the section was when the British retreated. They were the best army of that time and they were forced to retreat against their own people in America. It showed that the Americans were slowly gaining power at this point and the Revolution was coming closer.
Using The Past: While reading this book we can learn from others mistakes during the Revolution. We can see how they started out and what we should and shouldn't do in our government today.
Comment: Jenna, I agree that a big turning point in the section were the Battles of Lexington and Concord. After this there would no longer be peace between the British and the Americans. They were now fighting until the end.
Connection The battle of Bunker Hill was a very important part in this section. Although in the end the Americans did lose to the British due to their lack of ammunition, it showed that the Americans really did have a shot at winning this war. This is similar to the Everest Football team of this year. Even though we lost our first game we did show that we had a fighting chance against our competition.
Importance The passion of the colonists during this battle was really the important part of this section. It showed that they were able to pull it together when they needed to and fight for what they believe in. that passion would help them through the tough times but during this battle the lack of ammunition would show as an issue in loosing the battle and a future problem to fix.
Turning point The first Continental Congress was also a very important event. It showed that the Americans were not going to put up with the unfair things the British were imposing upon them, like the intolerable acts for example. And the second meeting really showed that America was in it to win it with the creation of the Continental Army and the Declaration of Independence.
Through their eyes In this section I really liked how we got a look into the eyes of warren during the battle. He is injuring people who he would normally be treating. That just shows how far some people are willing to go for independence and what they believe in.
comment i agree with MaKayla about the turning point. the point when you can see defeat in the eyes of your opponent is the moment that you can start to feel a sense of victory and start to get confidence twords the future.
Jenni Geurink
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Evaluation: Whenever I have heard about British fighting styles, it has been that they fought with the upmost politeness, fighting in strict formations. The story in this book contradicts that. They may have started fighting in regiments with even rows and precise firings, but by the time they got to Breed's Hill, they gave up on that ideal. It surprised me, especially when General Gage decided he would just "...destroy the entire town..." (p. 323). To think they would give up on there strategies for these so-called "uncivilized children" seems a bit strange to me.
Importance: I think it was a very important finding to tell about the British fighting styles because it shows where the government failed too. The soldiers fought the rebels with "animal viciousness" relaying some failed leadership (p. 282). I think the author didn't just want to show the differences between the colonists and the British, he wanted to show the corrupt government, the injustice. It wasn't just the king that presented the problem, it was parliament, it was the generals. There were many other people to blame. Every piece of leadership passed through many eyes and yet it stayed. The English brought this war upon itself by provided too many grievances, too many reasons for colonists to fight.
Reading like a Historian:
Change and Continuity: The main item that changed in the second section of this story is the people are fired up. They were brought together in the vital Continental Congresses. They spouted their opinions and came up with strategies. This meeting changed everything. They came together as a common people fighting the same enemy. They didn't want to fight, but they did what they had to keep their beliefs. Obviously the British did not benefit from this change, but some colonists didn't either. The Tories and even innocent civilians faced challenges because of this decision. But overall, the colonists benefited by working together in a they never had before.
Using the Past: We can really learn from some aspects of this war. I think we can come to an understanding that we work better when we come together as a nation. We don't need to be split up. This reminds of Congress today and how split divided we are. If we just came to a common consensus the general population would benefit. Nothing will work if we are divided as a people. We can also learn to stand up for what we believe in. Sam Adams, Ben Franklin, and even John Adams didn't take no for an answer. They fought for their constituents like any person of power should. This belief is what helped found America and it is something we should always hold dear.
Alexis Abrego
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Importance: A key idea about this section is the uniting of the colonies to overcome and solve their problems as a whole. They all had different perspectives and approaches to solving them, but this key group made some of the most important decisons for this country. This also was a major red flag to the British, because a united group was much more dangerous and serious than a bunch of unorganized rebels.
Generalizations: Time and time again the Continental Congress attmpted to reach Parliment and the King to beseach them to change their policies and be treated as equals to solve their problems. However, the English were as blind as ever with their lack of respect for the colists and their "laughable" continental congress. This lack of respect and ability to take a group of people seriously caused the English to lose one of their most valueable colonies.
Thinking Like A Historian:
Change and Continuity: People has always been nown to underestimate or misjudge other people. The British made a fatal mistake in taking the rebel militia seriously. By leaving such key points as Breed's/Bunker Hill unfortified or at least on watch the blood that was shed there may have been avoided.
Through Their Eyes: For people like Joseph Warren the cost of freedom didn't matter. He gave his life for a cause he believed in. he didn't care if he would be killed, even when he saw the masses of British coming before him. From where he stood all he saw was a chance to be a soldier fighting for his country.
Comment:The British were known for their militairy strategy and the way they lost control in this part is very important like Jenni stated though I feel that they weren't just doing things out of spite there was militairy strategy in destroying Charlestown and some of the other escapades the generals as a whole decided. Though the plan of attack of Breed's Hill was wasteful.
Tou Vang
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The first reading thought I had was a question. On page 288 as Revere is going to the boat he sees a woman walking down the street by herself. This woman is Mrs. Gage. He than finds out that she is visiting Warren. He welcomes her in and no more information is given. My question is what was she doing with him. He is one of the known leaders of the Sons Of Liberty. I think that she is giving information about the British to Warren.
Visualization:
Another reading thought that I used was visualization. The first part that had a really good image was on page 364. A man had stood up and yelled, "Bring 'em on! Bring them lobster-back!"(364). The out come was horrific. The man had lost his and had a big pool of blood on the "fresh earth". Another part that was easily to visualize was Warren's rampage. He had no ammunition and the only weapon he had was the butt of a rifle. He fought to the end, dying like a solider.
Change and Continuity:
At the end of the The Battle of Breed's Hill, we find out that Warren did not survive the battle. Also we find out that Pitcairn did not survive as well. With both sides at a lost, I think the British have lost more. The American army has killed one of their only four commanders.
Through their eyes:
This whole thing started with England abusing their power as a leader. The people of America did not like this and this caused them to rebel. This view point caused them to fight for freedom. One of which being Warren. Through out the battle this was Warren's Perspective. He did not feel like a leader, but by fighting with his soldiers he gave them a moral boost. He did not run from the battle, he was willing to die for his country.
Comment:I agree with Alexis, by underestimating the colonist it was setting the British to fail, but than again they have been doing this for a while.
Pamela Moua
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When the rebels won and drove away Pitcairn's men on page 309-310, it reminded me of this Dodge car commercial I saw once. Pretty funny.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFshCebyHYQ
Predict
When John asks if Sam has "someone in mind to comman this army?" (335), it was pretty obvious that it was going to be George Washington because he had experience and they were going up against s professional army.
Turning Points:
In chapter 26, Benjamin Franklin finds out about the death of his wife, Deborah. This makes him realize that there is only one home for him now so he returns to The Colonies.
Through their Eyes
Samuel Adams is very loyal. He did not change his views when Colonel Fenton said that General Gage would put Sam in a better position. He just told Fenton to tell Gage "to no longer insult the feelings of an exasperated people" (270).
Comment:
I agree with Tou's question. Since Mrs. Gage is an American herself, she probably felt obligated to give Warren details.
Elizabeth Wasniewski
ReplyDeleteComment: I agree with pamela with her prediction about George washington, it seemed like it was a question that was just asked so his cousin sam and everyone else could agree on him becoming it later on.
Reading Thoughts:
Importance- The main importance for this section seems to be the uniting of the colonies. With all of them together there could be a better strong power. "It has to be an army of all the colonies. We need new Jersey and Delaware to send their own men..." (335).
Visualize- When the men were on their journey to Philadelphia and got out of the country area you can see all of the people slowly gathering around them. "Adams responded to the waves of the people they passed, heard the word shouted out by many,Massachusetts. They know how we are. They are aware" (224). You can see the town they're going through with the town with how Adams describes it, "He could see a tall steeple, a grand church, more people stopping to point, wave at them" (224).
Reading like a Historian:
Using the past-Franklin ends up hurting physically, "My legs hurt, my knees are giving me some difficulty on the stairs...but I'm not in such bad condition" (224). Then later on he ends up hurting when his wife dies in chapter 26. This brings him back to the colonies and because of his past with how much passion he puts into his work he'll put all his concentration into his work now.
Cause and Effect- Because of the shooting in Boston, on there way to Philadelphia they had ran into areas that had "better news here, of course, better information" (224). They would have to be careful how they talk about shooting. Also when they were on there way they also wonder how they would be treated to there arrival. Because of them arriving before the men from Virgnia Sam explained his strategy "keep quiet on the issues, don't burst out with all our demands" (228). Adams listened but told Sam "I understand that...But we must hear every view, we must know how each colony perceives their role in this..." (228).
Rachel Bauman
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At the very end of this section, it is talked about how even Abigail Adams didn’t know about the battle that was happening right in front of her eyes. “She did not yet know the incredible cost, did not yet know that the British had left a thousand men on that ground, did not yet know…” (339) When the close people to the leaders of the rebellion don’t know what is going on, then what did a regular colonist know, how much of it did they know, or when would the colonists find out.
Importance
When Joseph Warren picked up a musket and joined in the fight against the British Soldiers, he sent a huge message to all the colonists fighting. He wasn’t only talking the talk, but he turned his words into actions. He was fighting about something he truly believed in, and brought hope to the rebelling colonist. Rafe Johnson talked to Warren about that, “…We volunteered to come here because we believe in what you’ve tried to do, the things you write about. But when a man stands up with a musket in his hand, sometimes it’s hard to remember all that. When I saw you, when you picked up that musket…well, you honor us, sir. I’m privileged to be fighting next to you.” (332) Because people, like Joseph Warren, put their words into actions, it inspired other people to help part from England.
Turning Points
In chapter 29, the British were being taken down by the colonists. The rebels hid in the trees and shot at the British, this action caused the British to stop fighting back. British were too tired and some of their men had been shot, they had no choice, they could not fight. Pitcairn said himself, “‘we cannot pursue. We must keep moving.’” (281) The roles were being reversed. Before the British were bullying the colonies. Now the colonists are taking control.
Differing Perspectives
The British and the colonists were in battles for very different reasons. The British were trying to get the colonies to get back in line and get rid of the radicals that were rebelling. The colonies were fighting for a say in their government, but also for freedom from England. Because I’m an American, I agree more with the colonists that were rebelling. We need to have a voice in our government and if we can’t be heard, then we need to start our own government.
Comment
Elizabeth, i agree with your thoughts about how this section is about how the colonies are coming together. In the beginning, they didn't have a set army. But there were people throught out the colonies forming their own groups that were fight against the british. At this point they may have not been fight together exactly. But they were fighting for the same cause.
Melanie Xiong
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The men from Massachusetts had a hard time getting the other Colonists to understand the importance of England's threat. They didn't understand how it felt, what was really happening in Boston. For instance on page 224, Adams recalls his conversation with some New Yorkers saying, "How dreadful your situation in Boston must be, please pass the wine." These people had no idea how terrible the conditions actually were. Then came the rumor that the British took over Boston and it brought the people together. They understood what was important.
Connections:
When Adams was thinking about their visit to New York and thought about how they didn't understand, it made me think of the movie Hotel Rwanda. There was a moment where an American cameraman was talking to the hotel manager about the hotel's condition and the dangers it faced. He felt sorry for the people, but he knew there was nothing that could be done. The hotel manager had asked what the outside people thought of this, and his reply was that people watch what's happening and say it's sad. Then they continue eating their dinner. This was exactly the same thing happening in the book. People knew what was going on, but didn't do anything to stop it. All they could give were words of pity and continue life.
Reading Like A Historian
Differing Perspectives:
I imagined myself in Gage's perspective. He was a man who like many others, wanted fame and glory. He had differing ideas from his wife on how to raise their children which caused bumps in his relationship. On top of that, because of his conversation with the King, he was given the responsibility of crushing the rebels. All of England's dignity was placed on his shoulders. I understand how he was caught up in the moment, how he feared that he might anger the King with his opinions. There was a lot a stress for this man. He desperately needed to defeat the rebels to protect his pride and his country's. Because he failed, he began waiting for a replacement. I can't say I agree with Gage, but I do understand what he's going through. There's nowhere left for him to go so he's looking for a way out.
Change/Continuity:
Gage was given reinforcements to help him correct his mistakes, but this change didn't do much. He was given three of the top generals in England, but because of all their differences they seem to get nowhere. This lack of cooperation caused problems for the army. And with Gage being an incompetent leader, choosing a battle plan only added to the stress. This proves that sending in reinforcements wasn't a positive change.
Comment:
I agree with Rachel in her "Importance" paragraph. Joseph Warren did turn his words into actions and not just watch the fighting. He showed that he didn't just talk about freedom, but fought for it as well. His actions were inspiring to the men around him.
Emily Thiele
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America was just a bunch of colonies to Britain. The British pictured Americans as needy, untamed farmers. They thought the colonists were unorganized. But when the Colonies agreed to come together, the British were in for a surprise. In the first battle of the section, the British were overconfident and did not consider the colonists a threat. However, the Americans had unique tactics, like stealth and camouflage, and they ended up making the British retreat.
Visualize
The image I could easily depict in my mind was the British coming up Breed’s Hill to attack the Americans. I pictured the colonists crouched, hiding behind the wall, all of them really nervous because they were facing the best army in the world, and they were outnumbered by about 500. I pictured the British lines marching up the hill, and it was easy to picture them like one entity, thinking and fighting as one, and they kept coming. If you’re a Star Trek fan, it reminded me of the Borg drones, who all share one mind and think and act as one. The colonists had indivuality and creativity on their side, and that’s part of what made them win the war.
Change and Continuity
In the first battle of section 2, the British didn’t bring so many troops to fight because they believed the colonists were an unorganized and powerless bunch of people who they could easily take on. They were proven wrong, however, and had to retreat. In the second battle, on Breed’s Hill, they brought many more reinforcements, 2,000 soldiers, so that they outnumbered the colonists. Warren describes his view of the British reinforcements: “He could see more detail now. It was not the boats that were red. It was their cargo. They were filled with masses of British troops” (Rise to Rebellion 360).
Turning Points
I think the biggest turning point of this section was when the British Army, renowned for being the best army in the entire world, was forced to retreat at the hands of their own colonists, a rag-tag group of farmers. I think this really showed the British and King George that the British Army wasn’t as good as everyone thought it was. After this first embarrassment, the British realized they were fighting a real enemy, and had to treat the American Colonies as a threat, and that really made the British rethink their tactics, causing a big change in play in the war.
Comment:
Melanie, I thought your perspective on Gage was really interesting. I can see how Gage could be relatable and that he was having lots of problems, especially since he was given such an enormous job by King George, but I still don’t like him or sympathize with him. He is a bad father and husband, and poor Margaret probably thinks he’s not good for their family, too.
Taylor May Hagenbucher
ReplyDeleteUsing The Past: What I think is most intrasting about this book is that in reading it, we can find out more about our past and be sure that we don'nt make the same mistakes our Fore Fathers did. But another important thing is to learn what they did that worked- and this whole book about the Revolution shows the importance that you need to stand strong if you think something wrong is happening in your government or een in just your community.
COnnections: Not this mighgt be a little out there because my mind wanders a ton, but while I was reading anything that had to do with Abigail Adams in this part I couldnt help but be reminded about my history ay project last year, which talked a lot about women's rights. Now, stay with me here, I know that she didn't have very many rights in the forming of the country, but she is a prime example of a strong woman, both in real life and this fictional story. She was inspiring to the women of today, and portrayed perfecting in this book.
Vocabulary: I'm pretty much and English freak, but I surprisingly had to look up a word. The word "pithy" came up on page 243, and I can honestly say I've never seen this word before. It means "consisting of pith," and pith means "detailed" or "importance."
Perspective: I have to say the perspective I like reading the most is Ben Franklin. Just something about his actions and words make me feel like he is the one who is most "for the people and by the people."
Comment: I agree with Emily, I don't like Gage at all. In the beginning I thought he was relateable and I felt for him, but then as we go on I see that, as Emily said, he's a bad father and husband, and he's selfish.
Judith Spear
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Big Ideas- I think that the big idea of this section was all 13 seperate colonies coming together as one body, willing to fight for the same cause. "If there is a fight, then we will fight together" (234). "They had reacted to the rumors os one body, one people" 235)" After the congress, all the people from the 13 colonies come together to form one body, one perople. they came together to fight the British for their independence. Most of the section talked about the speeches and meetings like the Continental Congress that took place to try to pursuade the colonists that it was necessary to split from England and become their own country.
Importance- One of the most onportant parts in this section was when the British were marching towards the American army and Joseph Warren looked around and grabbed the musket of a fallen soldier. That simple action symbolized that all the talk and planning were actually happening. It also meant that the the lawyers and the doctors and the generals were fighting together with the farmers and everyone else. They were all equal, trying to fight for the same cause. "When I saw you, when you picked up that musket...well, you honor us sir. I'm privileged to be fighting beside you" (369).
Reading Like a Historian:
Cause and Effect- Because of the Continental Congress, an idea of independence appeared in the minds of many people. Because of that idea and the mass of people, it helped casue the start on the Revolutionary War. The main people who helped this idea form were Samual Adams, John Adams, and the Son's of Liberty. "We must declare ourselves to be a free and independant country. We must establish ourselves with a government, we must invite alliences with foreign countries, build our own defensive structures..." (332).
Differing Perspectives- As the perspectives changed between General Gage and the Colonists, the way the people from Massachusettes were viewed changed. Sam Adams said that people were surprised to find out that the people from Boston were "Civilized". On the other hand Lord Howe said that he viewed the Congress as criminals.
Comment: Taylor, I agree with your comment about Ben Franklin being the most interesting perspective in the story. He really gives insight on to how the English are viewing all the events that are occuring in the colonies.
Ashley Hanke
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Big Ideas: I thought a big Idea during this section of the book was how the colonies come together as one; to support a single cause. The 13 colonies go against the British to fight back there independence, and grow stronger as a country to split away from the British.
Vocabulary:
While i was reading the section, I didnt know what the adjective " Cacophony" meant. Cacophony means a jarring, discordant sound. It is the use of harsh or discordant sounds in literary composition.
Thinking like a Historian
Change/Continuity:
The first battle against the colonists, Gage didnt think the colonists would be prepared for to go against them; but they were wrong, and had to retreat because the colonists had more power then the thought. When the second battle occurred on Breeds Hill, they outnumbered the colonists, and defeated them.
Through their eyes:
The whole conflict began in England when the abused their power as a country, and thats what caused America to rebel. During this section it was Warrens perspective, and him fighting for his country.
Kallie Ziegler
ReplyDeleteVocabulary: During the second section of the book I came across a word that I was unsure of. On page 243 I didn't know what oblige meant. I now know that oblige means in this case of the text to do what someone wants in order for that person to be content.
Question: While I was reading I had a question on page 271. I know that Gage has been given a specific task but thinking that he can just purchase Sam Adams patriotism is absurd in my perspective. I have been taught since I was little that feelings, love, or anything cannot be purchased. It simply just doesn't work that way. I was just wondering and thinking how Gage thought that Sam's patriotism was going to be purchased? I am very proud of the way that Sam Adams responded but the fact that Gage could even ask him that really shocks me.
Change and Continuity: Right after the "Boston Massacre" happened I am sure many citizens were scared to go outside; they wanted safety. It is very amusing that people can change so quickly. What I mean is it stated on page 302 that an audience came out to watch The Battle At Concord. It could be out of bravery or maybe it is just foolishness. Furthermore, as more and more events take place the people seem to change from not wanting to do with anything of it to being more involved.
Turning Point: There is a turning point for an individual, Gage. When the ministry sent three generals to be his subordinates the life for Gage really changed. Like the book stated, "He had not been replaced." (341) Although now he will have to try and be better than these men who have accomplished very outstanding things. William, Henry, and John are just coming to help Gage out but I feel like it is going to be hard for him to share the power. What Gage is used to is no longer the normal way.
Comment: After reading over Ashley Hanke's post I found myself to agree with what she stated for the big idea. The people are finally fighting for what they believe in not what the British tell them to believe in. This hopefully is a start to break away from the British like you said and finally end this issue.
Holly Solomon
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Preview/Predict:
After previewing section two, I came across a map in chapter 29. After examining the map and reading the annotations near it I made a few predictions about the upcoming element in this novel. I predict that Pitcairn's troops will march into Lexington and battle Parkers troops on the Lexington Green. And while this is happening Sam adams escapes north.
Visualize:
I can visualize the encounter with Pitcairn's troops and the rebel civilians in Lexington. Pitcairn ordered the civilians to put down their weapons and disperse immediately, and they did so. But then another officer yelled fire! and a nonviolent occurrence turned into a massacre. The rebels were running in a panic, as the guns were shot. "… women screaming, some running into the green, falling into the arms of their husbands, more voices, cries and curses from the men who were still trying to get away, to escape the blood spreading on the green" (. This imagery paints a very clear image in my mind of the chaos and goriness of this day in Lexington.
TLH Strategies
Change and Continuity:
At the beginning of this novel the British were viewed as a powerful empire however after the Battle of Breeds Hill, along with other battles the British empire is slowly diminishing. In fact, the British have lost more troops that the American rebels have.
Through Their Eyes:
During the Battle of Breeds Hill Warren provides leadership to his troops. Himself along with his loyal militia want to fight. They all strive for freedom, and their own rights apart from the British Parliament. They are willing to risk their lives, so that their families and friends can live a free life, a fair life free of corruption, violence, and unfair laws and taxes.
Comment:
After reviewing Kallie's thoughts and ideas I realized that her comment about change and continuity seems to be true in my opinion. The colonists were unwilling and did not want to get involved in anything against Parliament in the beginning. However, as time progressed more and more became involved. So i agree with Kallie that they became more involved.
Matthew Selting
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Question: One question that I have thought about goes back to my previous comment about there lack of communication. On page 267 Dr. Franklin receives a letter from his son saying he attended his mothers funeral. What shocked me is that the letter was written on Christmas eve; however, Franklin did not receive the letter until February according to the date at the beginning of the chapter. This means it took approximately two months for Franklin to receive the letter of his wife's death. Does it really take that long to transport mail? or was the letter simply held by someone for that long?
Connections: If I where to connect to any part of this section it would have to be when John Adams road off to the assembly accompanied by his wife. Mrs. Adams noticed that John was very worried about what he was going to say to the assembly and so she offered him a piece of advice, "My dear husband, I am surprised that you of all people, you who are so versed in all things to do with law, you who are capable of mastering your world, you think you do not have the genius to solve all our problems! Well, perhaps it might be a fine idea to take your doubts to Philadelphia. Perhaps you will meet others like yourself who also have doubts, who gear that their minds are inadequate to the task. Perhaps all of you who are so inadequate should join your minds, combine all the little bits of genius into one that is capable of some accomplishment. Perhaps that is the purpose of this Continental Congress!" (221). I believe that we can all relate to what she is saying, how no one person is good at everything, but together, as a whole, we can accomplish so much more then as individuals.
Reading Like a Historian
Turning Points: One important topic that stands out to me in this section is when Paul Revere road through Lexington on horse back to warn Sam Adams and John Hancock that the British where coming to arrest them. I believe this was very important because if he hadn't made it to Lexington in time Gage's soldiers would have captured two of the most important men to the sons of liberty which could have completely changed the outcome of the War.
Through There Eyes: On page 308 we really get a good viewpoint of what war was like back then and how frighting the rebels uniting as one unit must been. "All along the crest, the rebel line was still forming, massing more tightly as they moved forward, precise, and amazing display of drill and command. As they advanced down the hill, he could see the men themselves, and it was not like the green at Lexington, it was not forty men. It was four hundred" (308). When I look at this situation through the eyes of a commander who is accustomed to having his enemies back down at the sight of his army, it must have been truly terrifying. Not only was it bad enough that he was now faced with a rebel army almost as big as his own, but he was also loosing control of his soldiers which is a fatal mistake at the very least.
Comment: I agree with Holly's visual statement. I also believe that the author did a great job providing fine details of the battle at Lexington just as Holly pointed out.
Calvin Cottrell
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Importance: One of the most important events was when the colonial militias started surrounding Boston. One reason is that it kept the british at bay, stuck in Boston, and gave the other colonies time to create their own militas. And it gave the contiental congress breating room to appoint George Washington and official create a contiental army from the ragtag militias.
Preview and Predict: The colonist have been putting up a great fight in the first battles. Those at Lexington and Concord, and those at Bunker and Breed's hill. But the major problems are they lack of disipline and supplies. For example Con. Prescott led the troops at Bunkers Hill and Joseph Warren fought well. But one of the reasons they were over run is they lacked the supplies such as black powder and lead shots, and that is one of the main problems that will continue to face.
Reading Like A Historian
Differing Prospectives: There are many differing prospectives in the Congress. The more conservative members of the assemble, many from states like New York, wanted to create a 'Grand Council" to represent the colonies but still be connected to England.(pg. 242) While the more radical members, like the Massachsuettes delegates, voted to stop paying taxes to England altogether.(pg. 253)Finally on the other hand Georgia didn't send delegates at all.
Turning Point: A major turning point was when John Adams got the letter from his wife describing the raids on local farms that the british were conducting near Boston. This was a turning point because it made John Adams more radical like his cousin and it inspired him to spearhead the proposal to nominate Washington to lead the militas and to finally create and army for the colonies.
Comment: I agree with Matthew Selting's Through Their Eyes comment. The british were certainly unnerved by the fight the colonist put up. And they were defeated both physically and mentally at the battle of Lexington and Concord.
Rachel Maguire
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Reading Thoughts
Prediction – The end of part one was marked by the colonies coming together as one, so as part two began, I expected many changes. I thought that meetings between colonies would go smoother and people would begin talk of a united nation, rather than separate colonies. I thought that talk would arise of how to construct one government for all the colonies, rather than one government for each colony individually. Also, I thought there would be more unity with troop forces or more support from more colonies, rather than the ones closest to battle. Overall, I think I was overly hopeful that the colonies would come together quicker than they did.
Generalization and Connection– One generalization that cannot be overlooked is the power of men of high rank, like Warren, to fight right next to the soldiers he commands. Johnson highlights that truth as he stands beside Warren as they wait for another British attack. Johnson tells Warren that he honors them to be fighting beside them. That part reminded me of a brief conversation in “The Patriot” between two soldiers, one a colonist and the other a slave. The slave only had to fight 12 months for him to be a free man, so before the battle, the colonist reminds him that he’s served over a year, and the slave replies, “I know, I’m here now on my own accord.” Then the colonist says, “I’m honored to be fighting beside you… honored.” The scene between Johnson and Warren reminded me of how much that means. The honor between soldiers and their commanders is a powerful bond that keeps them together when they go into battle.
Reading Like a Historian
Differing Perspectives – One of the differences I noticed between the British command and the Continental command is how much the generals care about rank. When Washington was appointed the general of the continental army, he accepted reluctantly. Also, when Warren was at Breed’s Hill, Prescott recognized Warren as his superior and granted him command, but Warren immediately realized his knowledge was inferior and told Prescott to resume command. Later, after seeing Prescott’s leadership ability, Warren vows to make Prescott a general. The British, on the other hand, appoint generals based more on social standing than true ability. It’s a subtle -although not entirely homogenous- difference between the British and the Americans, but it is an important difference nonetheless, especially when you consider that, by the end of the war, the British would have four different commanders to the Colonies’ one.
Using the Past – One event during this section that I don’t think was mentioned by anyone yet was Lord Chatham’s meeting with Franklin. Lord Chatham asked Franklin to assist him in writing a speech to influence the king away from a war against the colonies. Franklin writes an eloquent speech urging the British to acknowledge their mistakes and listen to the colonies. At first, Lord Dartmouth agrees with the speech and states that he thinks it should be considered, but then Lord Sandwich speaks in absolute opposition to the speech, claiming that it asks them to violate the principles of their great empire. He rants about the influence of Franklin and ends his speech by rejecting it completely. In response, Dartmouth apologizes for his oversight. This scene could serve as a lesson to ask for help when you need it and listen to other people’s reasoning, because the loudest mouths aren’t always right.
Comments
Calvin, I agree that the combined effort of all the militias around Boston made a huge difference in controlling the British. Even though our militia didn’t really pose a huge threat to the giant British army, it gave us valuable time. Yes, supplies were an issue then and they never stopped being an issue until the alliance with France toward the end of the war. I agree, different perspectives in Congress caused endless problems. When dangers come near your home, you do whatever you can to stop them.
Reading Thoughts
ReplyDeleteVisualize: A great visual image that I had in my mind was when Adams leaves Boston, and all of the townspeople gather around in chapter 22. "As they moved out of Boston, farmers emerged from fields, women stepped out of small cottages, men on horseback moved aside, all saluting in their own way, offoring their hope and guidance and faith that the journey be successful." (221) This shows that the townspeople are pushing for their heros.
Importance: Major Pitcairn wants to make a plan to attack the enemy, but Gage said to wait until Lord Dartmouth issues the orders. It is their job to keep the peace. Gage says, "'I will not start a war, Major. We will make our show of authority, we will march the troops through the towns on drill, but there will be no aggressive act. At least, not by my orders'" (276). Later, Gage gets a letter from Lord Dartmouth allowing them to attack. Gage then says to Major Kemble who gave him the letter, "'Major, I need a meeting of the senior commanders, including the navy. Be sure to send word as well to Major Pitcairn. He has been positively itching for a mission. Well, now he shall have one'" (281).
Reading Like a Historian
Using the Past: People in the past weren't much different compared to people in the present. Like people today, people in the past would do anything to spread a little drama and chaos for their own benefit. In chapter 23, a rumor had spread stating that the British had started a "rampage of fire and death". The rumor started when General Gage's troops were spotted marching to Charlestown. The militia were too bold for British command, and they were brought together in a local gunpoweder and gun store, and spread destruction. The members of the militia foolishly bragged about the town's plan, and later Gage was notified. Rumors grew more and more, and people got scared. The word got out so far that the men in Philadelphia heard that Boston "smoldered in runins, blood in the streets... This rumor is a bit extreme compared to the ones today, but the present isn't so different from the past. We may have learned a little bit from the past, but there's still much more to learn.
Change in Community: I think its sort of funny that in the beginning of the book, the townspeople were really afraid after the Boston Massacre. But in chapter 29, people, more specifically men, were gathering to watch the Battle of Concord take place in Lexington. Obviously the community had changed majorly considering the people in Boston didn't even feel the urge to step outside.
Comment: Rachel, I agree with you in your Differencing Perspectives section, when you mentioned the differences between the Brittish and Continental command. The Continental commander the indevidual who does their absolute best, compared to the British who would wind up with more than one commander.
Jenny Steinke
ReplyDeleteVisualize: "The musket fire had stopped, and now there was a new sound, coming from the bridge, the sound of men cheering, the rebels suddenly erupting in a wild celebration of their victory"(p. 278) I could feel the excitement through my body as the rebels had driven the king's soldiers away. I cannot even imagine how they must have felt. Good, great, and happy do not even come close to the satisfaction in the young men's hearts as they became victorious. I can hear the loud cheering and wild talk to a point where it is almost overwhelming. All their hard work has paid off, yet there is still lots of fighting to do. This scene was unforgettable, for it was very easy to visualize and create a movie in my head. It seemed like I was there and had just driven the king’s soldiers away.
Connections: We have all lost a loved one and when this happens it seems like your life just stops, but the whole world just keeps on going. When Franklin lost his wife Deborah, it definitely shocked him. How could his wife die? Getting the letter two months after her death was probably also hard, for his wife was dead and he didn’t even know it. This was a very emotional time for Franklin and he did not have time to be sorrowful, but had to get ready for a fight. This all happen on page 240. I have lost friends and family to cancer and it is one of the hardest things to get through. There is so much going on in Franklins head that it probably overwhelming and stressful.
Reading like A Historian
Through Their Eyes: On page 332 there is a passage in which a man named Rafe Johnson spoke to Dr. Warren, “When I saw you, when you picked up that musket...well, you honor us, sir. I'm privileged to be fighting beside you." After reading this it got me thinking; is Warren any different than Rafe is? Sure Warren helped with saving lives of the wounded, but Rafe is making a big sacrifice just like anyone else fighting. He had to leave his friends, family, home, and chose to fight. He is a hero without even knowing it. He became a rebel, which take some guts. It's easy to do what one is told to do, but when it comes to doing what you believe in it is so much more difficult. Well, Rafe Johnson...you honor others too. You honor the ones who were not brave enough to go against England and be a rebel.
Turning Points: One of the biggest turning points in the book so far happened in chapter 29. This is when the rebels made the king’s soldiers retreat. Not only was this a time of celebration, but it also built up all the men’s confidence. They may be going up against a large, well trained army, but the rebels have more emotion in their fighting. They are fighting to be free from England. Driving the army away is just the beginning of something great. The men are fighting for the same reasons and it is all or nothing.
Comment: I agree with the visualize section. When Adams left I could see all the people stopping what they are doing to watch him leave. I can also hear "thank you" in the croud along with "you make us proud." Not many people are willing to leave their life to fight and risk their lives. Everyone who left were truely heros. I also agree with your using the past. People back then are just like us today. They liked their drama and rumors were also probibly spread.
Anna Balk
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Big Ideas:
A huge big idea in part two is the fact that each colony individually would be helpless in fighting the larger body of England. However, as they came together as one fighting power they were so much stronger. This actually became a threat to England causing their strength in the revolution. They wanted their independence, we know this from reading primary opinions, and as one powere they were able to fight for it.
Vocabulary:
I came across the word, 'warf' and honestly had no idea what that might be. I had to go to a dictionary and figured out that the word meant: "a structure on the shore of a harbor where ships may dock to load and unload cargo or passengers." Back in the days of the Revolution, they had some very interesting and sophisticated language compared to now!
Reading Like a Historian:
Using the Past:
There are many succesful things from these happenings in the past that we can use today. The revolution would not have been succesful if all of the colonies hadn't come together to fight as one body. Even though there was quarreling that existed between the colonies, they each stood up for what they believed in.. the same thing, independence from the British. Therefore, in doing this, the war on their part was succesful. In current issues we need to remember to stand up for what we believe in, and know that coming together like the colonists makes us stronger.
Turning Points:
Gage went into the revolution thinking that they would defeat the colonists with no problem at all. Going into the first battle, they were shocked to see that they were outnumbered and had to retreat the battle because surprisingly, the colonists had an extreme degree of more power than they thought.
Comment: Jenny, I agree with your 'Turning Points' section. Having the King's soldiers retreat was a huge excitement for the colonists. They knew they had the power in them to fight, because they fought for what they wanted, their independence. Numbers didn't matter.
Anna Welton
ReplyDeletePreview/Predict:
Looking at the section before I read, there were many maps of locations that I knew important battles occured at. I predicted that in this section, the Revolutionary war would begin. I predicted/had some prior knowlege that certain characters (ex.Patrick Henry, George Washington, Colonel Prescott) will have great historical importance later on in the government, community or military.
Visualize:
This section was great for creating mental pictures. It described the batle at Breed's hill in complete detail, such as how the soldiers dug out the hill to create a "fort". It also described in vivid detail what was happening on the battle field, making it easy for you to imagine exactly how close the British were before the order to fire came. The maps included in the section also helped the reader to understand where the battles took place.
Turning Points:
Hutchinson had failed to lead the colonists how the king wanted; he allowed the rebellion to grow and attack the British under his weak rule. This forced him to be replaced by General Gage. Gage's leadership marked the king's true attempt at dominating and crushing the rebellion. This ultimately made the colonists turn to violence and war to fight for their rights that were being taken away under the British rule. When the rebellion started, this eliminated any chance of turning back to the way things had been in the past- They would either defeat the British and gain their rights, or they would fail and the British would make life in the colonies unbearable.
Differing Perspectives:
Rise to Rebellion is written in different perspectives chapter by chapter. This is done so that one gets everyone's different voice and opinion on current events. The perspective I often agree with is John Adams. He thinks before he speaks, is a logical and practical thinker and is not as bold and brash as his cousin, Sam. He adds a level-headed voice in the mix of loud and angry radicals.
Comment:
Anna, I agree with your Using the Past section. Coming together as one nation was key to the success in later defeating the British Army. Also, without the majority of people working towards the same goal, the congress would not be able to accomplish anything that they were able to.
Grady Keding
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Continental Congress had an idea of independence and appeared the in minds of many people. Because of the excitement of the people.. it helped start the Revolutionary War. The Son's of Liberty were the main people in the excitement. They said that they needed to become free and and independent country.
Differing Prospectives:
There are many prospectives from the Congress members. Some of the more conservatives wanted to create a Grand Council to represent the colonies. The Massachusetts delegates voted to stop paying taxes to England altogether.And Georgia didn't send any delegates. So as we see there are many different perspectives to see what everyone is thinking/ feeling.
Connections: When Benjamin Franklin lost his wife I could really feel his pain and it could really comment to the readers. I thought that sense he didn't know until 2 months after then event.. i just couldn't imagine the pain that he must have felt thinking that his wife was alive and well when she had died. I think that reached out to a lot of people.
Prediction – Part One ended by the colonies coming together as one, so as part two began, I expected some dramatic changes. I believed that people would start acting as one and try to make the governments one, other than one government for each and every colony.
Comment:
Anna, i agree with you in John Adams having the best perspective and saying that he is logical and thinks about what he says before he talks. :)
Emily Neill
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Connection:
The connection I made was between Sam Adams, John Adams, Robert Paine, and Tom Cushing's journey to Philadelphia to represent the colonists at the Continental Congress and political campaigns. I made this connection because as the four were making their way to Philadelphia, every town they stopped in they tried to gain the trust of the colonists and explain more thoroughly what exactly it was they were going to be doings, as well as clearing up the rumors that were being made. This is just like the political campaigns we have now, minus the commercials, fancy buttons, and bumper stickers.
Visualize:
When soldiers came to attack Prescott, Warren and their men up on Breed's Hill, I could see the column of red making their way up the slant, the shock and the fear in the faces of the men behind the wall, and the smoke firing from their muskets. I can picture the depressing sight of "...a thick carpet of red and white, hands and arms and fallen muskets in one solid mass all down in front of the line" (pg. 335). But most plainly I can see the face of Warren, full of confusion and sadness as he sees the soldier he has just shot, and looks past the uniform to see the face, the face of another human being just like him.
Reading Like a Historian
Using The Past:
The past events from the town meetings, to the mobs, to the Boston Massacre and Tea Party, have all shown the seriousness of the frustrations of the colonists and have brought the men to where they are now - surrounded by their neighbors, family, friends - all ready to stand up for what they believe in through the process of war. WE can learn from the past by realizing that some issues can be solved through compromise rather than violence. In this case, I believe the war was inevitable and overall very effective and the best choice, though not all inconveniences whether big or small should result in violence.
Change and Continuity:
From the beginning of the book to this second section, the actions of the colonists towards the soldiers, Englishmen, and King George have became much more violent, though the perspective of each side has not. To the Englishmen and the King, the colonists are just another "thing" to control and take advantage of. To the colonists, the Englishmen and the King are oppressors, who try and control what they do, when they do it, and how they do it as well. Neither side has really benefited from the change thus far, the colonists have if anyone, just because they have proven to England that they are not defenseless and will fight back. The English have not, however, benefited from this because it is yet another issue that they must attend to.
Comment:
I agree with Anna regarding the different perspectives chapter by chapter. John Adams seems to know exactly what he's talking about and knows exactly what he needs to say and when he needs to say it. Overall, Adams, being a lawyer, keeps it calm and cool even when swarmed by those not nearly as focused as him.
Mitchell Marten
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When Adams finally agrees to go to the meeting for the sons of liberty, I can't help but think of the picture in Congress of all of the men of that time debating. Although that is not trying to portray that event, it does stick in my mind because such a mindful man of the law has been outraged enough that he speaks his mind freely amoung many others who oppose the kings actions, the picture of him on the podium sends chills through the body for such a grand display of unity.
Connections:
When Washington was appointed the position of Commander in Chief he did not feel like he was aquired to do such a job he considered himself not expierienced to do. My mom recently was promoted to basically running a dental office and being the one who ensures everyone gets "x" amount of hours. She did not feel like she was worthy of the job but as she learned and felt the support of the office she has grown into the position as Washington did with the army.
Turning Point:
During the battle of Breed's Hill the Colonial Army had inflicted considerable damage to the British force, although they had to retreat from the battle they left with a great message that if the british were to succeed they would have to have a much larger force due to the casualties done by a "rag-tad group of farmers."
Keri Rogan
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Vocabulary/Concepts
As I read this section I came across the word orators many times. I then looked it up in the dictionary and found out that it was "a public speaker, especially someone with great eloquence." This made sense to me, because every time I saw this word it was with the speeches or meetings that Adams and the other delegates were at.
Visualize
The easiest part for me to visualize was The Battle of Breeds Hill. I thought the description of this event was wonderful. In my mind I could see all the red uniforms of the British as they were coming towards the rebels. I could hear the voice of Prescott yelling, "Don't fire...till you see the whites of their eyes!" (pg 367) And last, I could see Warren as, "he tried to hold the gun still, but it was shaking, jumping, bouncing about with the drums, the damned drums, and the end of the barrel was moving all over the man's body, his chest, his stomach, no, too low, now the head, the young face...freckles...and he saw the man's eyes..." (pg 368)
Thinking Like a Historian
Through Their Eyes
When General Warren went to go visit Colonel Prescott he never imagined that he would get in the action. When he did he was scared because he had never done it before. The author writes, "Warren clenched his fists, pulled himself into control... felt his hands shaking, blinked hard, tried to clear his mind" (pg 364-365).
Turning Points
One main point was Paul Revere's ride to go warn others about the coming of the British. Because of his job the men knew it was time for the fight. "All along the roads, doors opened, window curtains were pulled back, the farmers and villagers coming awake to the sharp call that a great force of soldiers was marching their way" (pg 290)
Comments:
I agree with Mitchell when he said that the meetings of the Sons of Liberty was a good event to visualize. I could also see and hear the men while they were speaking at the podium.
Mai Xee Vang
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Big Idea:
A big idea in section two of this book in my opinion is the fact that Britain underestimated the Colonists. For example, in the battles of Lexington and Concord, the British thought it was silly of the colonists to stand up to the royal army of the king. When time came though, and the Colonists defeated the British troops it was probably quite a surprise. This underestimation of the Colonists and their rag-tag farming militia men happens several times.
Prediction:
While reading about John Adams' strong decision about getting a professional commander to command the army, it was pretty obvious he was talking about the famous man from Virginia: George Washington.
READING LIKE A HISTORIAN
Differing perspectives:
We all that theirs two sides to every story. In this "story" the British are fighting because they want more land, the Colonists are fighting because they want nothing to do with England. It's understandable if you're looking from a British man's perspective, for example King George III. His family has been conquering land for centuries that's why the British Empire was the most stable, so fighting with the Colonists was just another way to make his Empire bigger and him a stronger man. Looking through the Colonists' eyes (sons of liberties), they ran from England for freedom, the reason they fight is for independence. Personally, i agree more with the Colonists because if you move away from something you don't like, (like the British laws and rules) you don't want it to follow you.
Using the Past:
In reading this book you can learn that fighting for what you think is right... is right. It shows in present day fantastically. People in colonial times rebelled i.e. protests etc... We protest nowadays and that's how we get to the higher power. So through understanding how the past reached the higher power, we use the same skill.
COMMENT:
I agree with Kerri about the visualizing of the battle of Bunker Hill and how the author did a fantastic job at writing it. I also agree with her tid bit on Turning point when Paul Revere warned the men. Thanks to Paul Revere the men were prepared to fight for their freedom and today's freedom.
Jon Rohr
ReplyDeleteBig Ideas/Generalization- One big idea in section two is that all the colonies came together to try to beat the British. England thought the colonies had weak leadership and were no threat to them, but they didn't know how much stronger the colonies got by joining together. They were very confident that America would surrender right away. America knew the have an advantage in the war because it is in America so they know the land better.
Importance- The importance of section two is that instead of 13 different colonial armies in America, they are now 1. They brought in all their ideas to find the best way to defeat the British. The colonies knew that the only way they can win the war is to come together, they had no chance if they fought as 13 separate armies.
Reading Like an Historian
Turning Points- People viewed the British army as a powerhouse in the world, so England thought they had total control over America. The colonies saw this as a chance to become stronger and upset the British in the first battle. It was a reality check for the arrogant British army.
Change & Continuity- England's overconfidence has remained the same throughout this time thinking that America is nothing. One big thing that changed was that the American colonies came together for the war to defeat England. America benefited the most because by coming together, they brought in many more great ideas and tactics.
Comment- Mitch, I very much agree with you when you say that the colonial army sent a big message to the British. The British have a much harder fight on their hands than they predicted.
Jordan Zywicki
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Importance: Towards the beginning of chapter 28, it tells us that Revere had noticed another change in routine. “Revere had noticed another change in British routine. More than once a day, some officer, perhaps a small group of them, would happen by his workshop, pay their own compliments. He understood that they were on their own personal mission, finding out what the fuss was about, just who this silversmith was and what manner of threat he might be to the affections of their women. But today they had not come, the streets quiet, belonging only to the citizens, many with quickened steps, their sense of alarm driven by the feeling that something was already happening, some movement, some plan of the army that no on could explain.” Because of everything that is happening, things/people and the routine are changing. People are becoming more aware, and cautious.
Visualization: In the beginning of chapter 28, I could easily picture Paul Revere walking down the alley and seeing all the things he sees. “Revere moved into the narrow alleyway, stopped for a long moment in the dark, listening, scanning the street, doorways and the black windows. He had passed the tavern where so many of the officers could always be found, was as surprised as the man who served the ale that the place was quiet, no discordant songs spilling into the street. His eyes sought out the shape of the doorway, a few steps farther down the alley, and he moved that way, then waited one more cautious moment. Suddenly the door opened, dull candlelight splitting the alley, one man slipping outside. The door closed quickly, and Revere saw the man glancing about, adjusting his eyes in the dark. He recognized the man’s stooped posture, the floppy hat. It was Will Dawes, who saw him now.” (Pg. 255)This was a good scene to visualize, because it went into very good details.
Reading like a historian-
Turning Points: A turning point, I think, is when Benjamin Franklin decides to move back to the colonies after he hears his wife has died. A passage in the book says: “My son is right. I have been away too long. There is only one home now. He looked at her, thought, it will be farewell now…. He had certainty, knew the only place he belonged now. He shuffled the papers, searching for the letter he had already composed, booking the passage to Philadelphia.”(Pg. 241) He realizes that the colonies is where he belongs, and that it’s his only home.
Through their eyes: The battle that happened in England was because they had abused their power as a country, which made America rebel. Warren provides leadership to his troops during the Battle of Breeds Hill. (Most of this section was through Warren’s eyes, and how he was fighting for his people.) He and his militia are willing to fight and risk their lives so that their families and friends can be free from all the violence, and arbitrary laws. They all aim for freedom, their own rights, and want to be away from the British Parliament.
Comment: Jon, I deffinitely agree with your turning point. You stated it very well.
Khalia Kulppi
ReplyDeleteimportance; the most important part of this section is when the american realize that they need to join together in order to beat the british.
Connection- When the colonists joined together it reminded me of the movie, Gridiron Gang. in this movie, a bunch of gang ridden convicts make a football time inside of a prison. they all hated each other at the beginning of the movie, however throughout the movie they got closer because they realized in order to win the football game they had to join together, this is what the colonists did in order to beat the british.
i agree with jon rohr when he says how the brithsh were overconfident and arrogent when they started this battle. it was for sure a major part of the reason that the colonies had over powered them.
Zach Neuner
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Big Idea/Generalizations:
A big idea that I saw in the second part of the book was the British fighting strategy compared to that of the Rebels. A good example is when the Gage, Howe, and Clinton are planning an attack on the Charleston Peninsula. General Clinton's plan is to, "sweep in behind the rebel position. The rebels would have nowhere to go and would probably surrender" (350). To this Howe replies, "you propose to assault the rebels from behind?...I will not debate General Clinton on the proper etiquette of war" (350). Howe proves that the British believed that there was a "proper etiquette" to war, something that the rebels will not follow. Howe and Clinton also prove that the British underestimate the rebels. Howe states, "it is entirely possible we may not have to fire one shot" (351).
Visualize:
Something I could easily visualize was after George Washington gives his acceptance speech to be General of the Continental Army. He shakes hands with Benjamin Franklin, and states, "I am afraid I am but an amateur in these affairs" (340). To which Franklin replies, "So are we all, Colonel" (340). This statement made me realize that Washington and Franklin both knew what a huge responsibility they had. They had to make choices that could mean the loss of lives and change the future for both Britain and the Colonies. It also made me realize that Franklin and Washington both wondered if they could handle this huge responsibility.
READING LIKE A HISTORIAN
Turning Points:
A huge turning point in the American Revolution was the battle of Lexington and Concord. There the rebels decided to make a stand against the British army, and fired the first shots of the war. I thought it was very interesting that the author wrote the battles through the perspective of Pitcairn, the British officer in charge. The biggest turning point was when the first shot was actually fired on the British, and the British returned fire. Had this not happened, had the rebels just dispersed and let the British continue on, things might have turned out very different in the revolution.
Differing Perspectives:
Different perspectives caused a challenge for the delegates from Massachusetts, and it was made obvious when they traveled through New York. Sam Adams states, "Here is the challenge gentlemen. This is a very different world. No opposition, no armed siege, nothing to inspire their own protests" (223). Because the people of New York are living happily under British rule, they have a different perspective on the idea of breaking ties with England.
Comment:
I agree with Khalia about how important it was that the colonies joined together. They realized that the problems of one colony was the problem of all the colonies.
Alexa Denk
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Questions:
On page 220 it says "Are the infirmities of old age so infectious that not only the bodies of the people, their very bones, but everything they touch, everything around them, every institution must collapse into something rotten?"(pg. 220) I question does every negative occurance have to negatively affect everything else? Sometimes said negative occurances positively affect your future decisions and actions.
Connections:
In section 2 the tension rises even more than it already has due to the escalating amounts of British soldiers occupying the colonies. The more the English try to force the colonists to do what they want the more the colonists realize how unfairly they're being treated and rebel. This happens in many books and movies, even in everyday life. And in all these instances you find that the character being suppressed or controlled tends to revolt and try to do the opposite of what they are being demanded to do.
READING LIKE A HISTORIAN
Turning Points:
A major turning point, I believe was when Benjamin Franklin beccame a member of the Continental Congress. At first I didn't think that one man would have much influence of so many intelligent men. He added much needed information because of his years spent living and dealin gwiht the people of England. Without him i'm not sure the people would have realized that every negative thing they encountered was due to King George sending his approval overseas.
COMMENTS:
I agree with Zach when he says that a major turning point was when the first shot of the war was fired. Like he says if that had not happened history would be drastically different.
Jacob Kolbeck
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Visualize:
Something I see very clearly is the British all lined up waiting to have a "fair" fight with the rebels. The rebels know they can't win with that kind of fighting stratigy and switch to the indian way known as gorilla warfare. I picture them sneaking up on the british and just charging them from the back or hiding behind trees encircling the British.
Importance:
The idea that all the colonies now acted and fought as one big force was devastating to the British. The British most likely thought they could take out every coloney 1 by 1 and were rudely awaken when they saw all forces combining.
Reading like a Historian
Cause and Effect:
The British started out fighting with their usual "formal" way of fighting and were caught off guard by the rebels different style of fighting. The rebels won many of the first wars due to these. The British eventually adapted to these fighting ways and the war was more even now.
Turing Point:
A very large turning point for the rebels was the realization that the king influenced more than what they origonally thought. This fired up the people even more and made them more rebelious and fight harder in war. This gave them the will and strength to fight on till the end without giving in. They wanted that freedom and they were going to have it.
Comment:
I agree with Alexa in saying that without Benjamin the leaders of the country wouldn't know entirly what their up against if not for his prior experience in Britian.
Jenna Maly
ReplyDeleteImportance: The most important aspect of this section are the battles at Lexington and Concord. The fact that this is the first time that the English army faces the colonial army makes it most memorable. They have finally realized that the Americans have land, the element of surprise, and passion to fight for what they believe in on their side. The meetings of the Continental Congress were also very important, especially the second one. This is when they make the plans to take action against the English, they elect Colonel George Washington from Virginia to lead the army, and they determine that a war is inevitable.
Visualize: The Battle of Bunker Hill was definitely very easy to visualize in this section. Shaara uses such detail that I found myself in Warren's shoes. I could feel my heart racing. I could hear the drums and the screams and the gunshots. It was so easy to place myself back in that time. Undoubtedly the most exciting part of the section for me.
Cause and Effect: In this section there is extensive cause and effect for both the British and the American armies. One cause is the three disagreeing generals coming over from England. This caused the British strategy to take longer in planning. Evidently leaving more time for Washington, the generals, and the soldiers to prepare for battle. During this point of British weakness they are inadvertently giving strength to the Americans. Another one of the cause and effect parts that I recognized as important was when Paul Revere made his ride and warned Sam Adams and John Hancock that the British were coming. Because of his actions Adams and Hancock were not captured by the British.
Turning Points: There were many turning points in this section of the book. In my opinion the biggest one was the Battles of Lexington and Concord. This was the first time the British had permission to fight back against the rebels. This was a big turning point because there was no going back to peacefulness they had once had under the Kings rule. The Americans would have to move forward in their steps to independence whether they wanted to or not. Seeking forgiveness from the King would only put their process back even farther.
Comment: Alexa, I agree with your turning points section about how much things changed when Benjamin Franklin beccame a member of the Continental Congress. He definitely helped the men out in ways I'm sure no one else could have.
MaKayla Cywinski
ReplyDeleteVisualize:
The second section of this book was written in great detail. While I was reading it I got vivid pictures of the Battle at Breeds hill. I could see what the soldiers went through in the battle and it helped me to understand the fight better.
Vocabulary/Concepts:
While reading this section when they initially talked about the Battle at Breeds Hill I decided to look it up because I hadn't heard much about it in previous classes. After looking it up, I got more insight on the topic and it helped me better understand the battle and what all went on during it. The online resource gave me a better understanding of the section.
Turning Point:
To me the biggest turning point of the section was when the British retreated. They were the best army of that time and they were forced to retreat against their own people in America. It showed that the Americans were slowly gaining power at this point and the Revolution was coming closer.
Using The Past:
While reading this book we can learn from others mistakes during the Revolution. We can see how they started out and what we should and shouldn't do in our government today.
Comment:
Jenna, I agree that a big turning point in the section were the Battles of Lexington and Concord. After this there would no longer be peace between the British and the Americans. They were now fighting until the end.
Cory Marquardt
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The battle of Bunker Hill was a very important part in this section. Although in the end the Americans did lose to the British due to their lack of ammunition, it showed that the Americans really did have a shot at winning this war. This is similar to the Everest Football team of this year. Even though we lost our first game we did show that we had a fighting chance against our competition.
Importance
The passion of the colonists during this battle was really the important part of this section. It showed that they were able to pull it together when they needed to and fight for what they believe in. that passion would help them through the tough times but during this battle the lack of ammunition would show as an issue in loosing the battle and a future problem to fix.
Turning point
The first Continental Congress was also a very important event. It showed that the Americans were not going to put up with the unfair things the British were imposing upon them, like the intolerable acts for example. And the second meeting really showed that America was in it to win it with the creation of the Continental Army and the Declaration of Independence.
Through their eyes
In this section I really liked how we got a look into the eyes of warren during the battle. He is injuring people who he would normally be treating. That just shows how far some people are willing to go for independence and what they believe in.
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i agree with MaKayla about the turning point. the point when you can see defeat in the eyes of your opponent is the moment that you can start to feel a sense of victory and start to get confidence twords the future.
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